BSG: A Tyrant Spell (Kara/Lee)

Apr 01, 2005 22:48

kattiya organized the Slashy Smut Challenge (sschallenge). I received the following prompt: Wallbanger (not worksafe), and I ended up writing het. Go figure.

Title: A Tyrant Spell
Author: voleuse
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Ship: Kara/Lee
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: The storm is fast descending, and yet I cannot go.
Notes: S1, no spoilers

1,987 words )

bsg: lee-kara, bsg, bsg: on holiday

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anr April 2 2005, 17:02:16 UTC
GUH. That was awesome. Perfect characterisations. Best bit would have to be the image of them in the pool, right before they're interrupted. Just gorgeous.

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voleuse April 6 2005, 19:50:50 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and YES. I love that image.

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fatema April 2 2005, 17:57:26 UTC
OH damn. DAMN! Ooooooooooh! This was perfect. The imagery - so vivid and delicious. I loved it. *sigh* Oooooooh. They need to put that into the show. *sigh*

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voleuse April 6 2005, 19:51:21 UTC
Thanks! And I will be THRILLED if they ever include any incarnation of the pool scene in the show, EVER. ::wants::

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brynnmck April 4 2005, 16:18:55 UTC
Yay! Oh, I'm so glad someone wrote fic about that unfilmed scene. :) And this was perfect, hot and giggly, and I really liked the way you used sound to enhance the sensory experience, like "the trickle-drip of water splashing against the concrete." Beautiful. Great work.

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voleuse April 6 2005, 19:52:01 UTC
Thank you! I'm desperate for that scene, honestly. It would have been beautiful, though I can see how it wouldn't really fit into the episode.

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brightest_blue April 4 2005, 16:50:58 UTC
Yay! Porn without angst! Yummy.

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voleuse April 6 2005, 19:52:14 UTC
*g* Thanks!

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fried_flamingo April 4 2005, 19:57:16 UTC
This may sound bizarre but the thing I found hottest about this fic (which was fab BTW) was Lee's teeth against her neck. What can I say, I've got a neck thing! Nicely done.

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voleuse April 6 2005, 19:54:24 UTC
Me, too! It's such a tiny thing, but I had to slip it in there.

Thanks!

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