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The Office: I Might Break (Jim/Pam)

Jun 05, 2006 16:15

I am gakking the structure used by 1sentence and 1character and adapting it to my own purposes. That is, one sentence for each episode of The Office. I reserve the right to develop these into actual stories in the future. *g*

Title: I Might Break
Author: voleuse
Fandom: The Office (US)
Ship: Jim/Pam
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: I have been here many ( Read more... )

the office

Comments 39

svilleficrecs June 5 2006, 23:30:19 UTC

*flail*

YES! Each of these deserves to be its own 100 word ficlet, and then its own 1000 word scene!!

YES!!!!

Each and every one!!!

*flail* Jimandpam! (still, that's the only word that truly encompasses their jimandpamness. )

moodfic June 14 2006, 01:20:55 UTC

Your ambition staggers me. Though I shall think about it, yes. JIMANDPAM!

teffy June 5 2006, 23:35:27 UTC

"You should have introduced me," he says in passing, and for some reason, Pam blushes.

I wibble at the thought that all these could be written out into fics in the future. *wibblewibblewibble*

moodfic June 14 2006, 01:21:09 UTC

Hee. Thanks!

thekatebeyond June 5 2006, 23:37:55 UTC

This is fabulous. I love it. It just gives me that sort of breathless feeling I get during those really tense Jim/Pam moments.

moodfic June 14 2006, 01:21:26 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

destro June 5 2006, 23:52:13 UTC

Oh, this broke me. I love how this structure works intrinsically with this show, since it's supposed to be a documentary, you can break their little moments episodically and this works so well. Sparse, bittersweet and seeped in tension. Guh. I sure you develop these into stories in the future, please, please, please...

moodfic June 14 2006, 01:21:48 UTC

Yay! Thank you! And I certainly will consider future stuff, yes.

kyrafic June 5 2006, 23:54:17 UTC

Oh man, EXCELLENT. Each of these says so very much and ties into the episode so well; it's a really intense reading experience. And I want more more more from every one.

Favorites: 2.01, 2.02, 2.04, 2.09, 2.14!!!, 2.16 (Dwight!), 2.19 and of course 2.22. (I hadn't though of the smoke, but he was standing near Jan, so; perfect.)

(I'm not sure I get 1.03, though -- is it because he suggested Dwight to pick the health plan?)

I really hope you write more soon!

moodfic June 6 2006, 00:00:19 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed them.

I'm not sure I get 1.03, though -- is it because he suggested Dwight to pick the health plan?

I am going to have to expand that one, clearly, because it's actually one of my biggest beefs with Jim. He could have very easily picked out a decent health plan, but didn't. And there's no way he didn't know what would happen with Dwight. Just, argh! That moment drives me crazy.

kyrafic June 6 2006, 18:07:57 UTC

That's an excellent point. I have to confess, I really love that they let him (and Pam) have all these flaws -- he pulls things like this and really *doesn't* have any ambitions and so on. It makes them human; I wish fic explored it more!

moodfic June 14 2006, 01:22:20 UTC

I wish fic explored it more!

Hey, if you will, I will! *g*