Storyteller

[moo_marie]

“Daddy! Daddy! Tell me a story!” Blonde pigtails flew behind her as she ran across the room and climbed into his lap.

“What sort of story would you like?” he replied smiling at her enthusiasm.

“Tell me about when you were little!” Her eyes lit up. She loved to hear stories about his childhood. Hers was so boring and his was so exciting“What do

Comments

[insolentscrawl]

I do like this. It's wonderful to think back on our life as a story, and the people who remember those stories about us.

[walkertxkitty]

I like the simplicity of this tale but I feel like it could have used something else, perhaps a third segment to tie into the earlier repetition. The second story is the weaker of the two, as I had expected to hear a story involving the mother in order to keep continuity. Even so, it's well done.