Brief Lives (6/?)

Aug 12, 2011 12:57

Title: Brief Lives (6/?)
Author: monstrousreg
Word count:  3221
Warnings:  Erik having.... feelings.
Pairing: Erik/Charles.
Summary: Erik thinks he's going to seduce, interrogate and murder some nondescript CIA intelligence agent, and winds up biting more than he can chew. Charles is not keen on being murdered, he doesn't favor interrogations, and he's ( Read more... )

erik lehnsherr has feelings, fic, x-men:1st class, au, ororo is awesome, plot bunnies from hell and similar rando, erik/charles

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monstrousreg August 14 2011, 13:49:31 UTC
Jaja y bueno, no todos los capitulos de esta historia tienen que ser pesados y tristes. Para eso tenemos a Dickens, para deprimirnos. Erik tenia un lado jugueton en la pelicula, asi que quise quedarme con eso. Y si, esperemos que con el apoyo de Raven las cosas se faciliten un poco... claro que todavia tiene que convencerlo a Charles XD

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monstrousreg August 14 2011, 13:50:43 UTC
Thank you so much! *hugs back* I´m always a little scared the coming chapter won´t meet the expectations, you know?

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efcia August 12 2011, 22:35:17 UTC
Last time I was rambling about Charles- I can't help it, he's way too interesting character. But now is time for Erik. First of all- Charles as an object of Erik's fascination. In the movie, I guess, Charles seems to be the one more fascinated, but then Erik is the one to say the famous words: "I want you by my side." So the whole "fascination" seems to work both ways and I'm really glad I can see it in your story. They both know they're equals and are not afraid to admit it. Second thing is the fact Erik is trying to "tame" Charles, he doesn't try to rush anything. Somehow it suits him: he was in Shaw's hands, so he knows how to treat Charles. Of course Raven is the one to notice all his efforts and I have to admit that Erik's answer is beautiful in its simplicity. Ha wants Charles just because he wants him, nothing more. Also I love the scene in which Charles greets Raven. Not being able to touch other people is hardly imaginable, it would be extremely hard. The desire to touch and to be touched is so basic for human beings... So I' ( ... )

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monstrousreg August 14 2011, 14:05:54 UTC
Hi! I love your ramblings! I always grin when I see your comments, seriously ( ... )

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efcia August 14 2011, 16:17:28 UTC
First of all: your welcome! And I'm really happy to hear you like my ramblings, I'm usually writing them late at night, so I can't never be sure if I'm making any sense at all ( ... )

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narya86 August 12 2011, 23:20:19 UTC
Weeehhh. :D Progress! And Ororo is still priceless. Btw, I can't believe how quickly you're posting these... or is the story already finished? ^^

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monstrousreg August 14 2011, 14:08:27 UTC
Hey! Yes, progress, because Erik is an unstoppable force of nature when it comes to getting what he wants, as we all know. I´m glad you like Ororo!

No, I don´t have the story finished, but I do have at least two chapters written ahead of the one I´m posting. That way I know where we´re going. And since LJ has these size restrictions for the entries, they´re rather short chapters, as well, easy and quick to write.

I´ll update on Monday!

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narya86 August 14 2011, 23:11:11 UTC
Mmhh the unstoppable force of nature... nice. ;) But very true as well.

Oh well, then you're still awesomely quick with writing the chapters! It's a thing that seems common in this fandom, tbh - I never have to wait too long for a story to be updated which is a really, really great feeling.

Huh, but about the size restrictions? I don't know, I never had to split up any posts of mine because it was too long, and chapters up to 6,000 words aren't uncommon for me. How is that with you?

Yay, awesome, that means I have something to look forward to for tomorrow. :D

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nix_this August 12 2011, 23:46:17 UTC
It's like Christmas! Suddenly there are MORE chapters of this lovely story (which is still completely riveting, btw) and I LOVE the direction you're going.
<3

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monstrousreg August 14 2011, 14:10:41 UTC
Thank you! I try to post as often as I can, since I´m as eager to see what you think as you are to know what happens next.

And I´m glad you like the story and where I´m taking it, I know I´ve forcefully set a slow pace, but it´s the only way it can work =D

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