There was a beautiful poem in my Inbox this morning

[monrovianvogue]

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[azorak]

that was the most beautiful thing i've ever read

presenting "MegaDik" by Anonymous.

[wondershot]

Some structural analysis of "MegaDik", by Anonymous.:

The use of masculine end rhymes creatively displays the "masculine" flavor of the poem. Also, the end-stopped quality of each line (units of sense correlate with units of line) reflects the movement of pushing into something and stopping.

Nice job, but breaks meter in line 5. Guess we all slip sometimes.

Re: presenting "MegaDik" by Anonymous.

[pwylltwiceborn]

you are not sure she'll yearn for more

that's my suggested edit.

[admina]

There are....

no words.

[flamingophoenix]

that's brilliant. I hadn't realized that spam had reached this level yet.