Fic: It's Gonna Bleed Sometimes

Dec 22, 2009 19:33

Title: It's Gonna Bleed Sometimes
Author: monroeslittle 
Genre: Twilight -- J/B
Rating: PG
Summary: AU in New Moon: Bella couldn't stop Charlie from sending her to Florida, even if she convinced him to let her return a few weeks later. But because of that, she never learned to hear Edward through danger, and she never be-friended Jacob. And where did she ( Read more... )

bella/jacob, one-shot

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windsong101 December 23 2009, 02:27:54 UTC
So beautiful =O

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monroeslittle December 23 2009, 17:52:07 UTC
Thanks :)

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_argustar December 23 2009, 02:38:34 UTC
This is really, really lovely. Honestly, if I was going to cite every bit I loved, I'd probably wind up quoting the whole thing back at you.

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monroeslittle December 23 2009, 17:53:16 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it all!

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greeneyed_me December 23 2009, 04:15:58 UTC
Wow. That was a breath of fresh air!

I've never a story quite like it. It was beautiful. :)

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greeneyed_me December 23 2009, 04:17:49 UTC
*never read a story

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monroeslittle December 23 2009, 17:54:13 UTC
Thanks! I wondered if perhaps something like it had been done before, but I'd never read anything like it and once the idea got stuck in my head, I had to write it!

I'm glad you liked it!

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jacobsgrrrl December 23 2009, 04:23:00 UTC
That was really beautiful, I actually teared up. Sigh...Jake is so amazing.

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monroeslittle December 23 2009, 17:55:43 UTC
Thank you! I got so into it at one point that I was crying, and my brother knocked on the door to make sure I was okay! ;)

And yes, Jake is very amazing!

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nemesisstar December 23 2009, 14:31:03 UTC
Oh my goodness this was absolutely breathtaking!! This is a completely new dynamic to their relationship, one that I have never seen. And you put it together so beautifully. Wonderful, my dear. I would love to see a continuation but it also stands alone just as well.

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monroeslittle December 23 2009, 17:57:08 UTC
Thanks very much!

I was a little nervous about how it would turn out, as I've never written anything like it before, so its good to know you think I did it well!

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