Fic: The World Spins Madly On

Dec 01, 2009 19:49

Title: The World Spins Madly On
Author: monroeslittle
Genre: Twilight (J/B -- 'cause, yeah, I'm one of those people, and better yet, I was long before Taylor Launter was cast as Jacob!)
Rating: Nice and innocent :)
Summary: AU: The Cullens never came back in New Moon (It's been done before, I know). A look at the life Jacob and Bella would have led, with a ( Read more... )

bella/jacob, one-shot

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monroeslittle December 2 2009, 01:42:10 UTC
Thanks! :) It is a little confusing right at the start, I know, but I kind of like being confusing at the beginning, as evil as that might sound.

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jaydestarlight December 2 2009, 01:41:27 UTC
the writing flows easily and the style is simply gorgeous.
i was a bit confused as to who the narrator was at first for similar reasons as anythingbutgrey but despite that i loved every word of this fic. thank you for writing it!

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monroeslittle December 2 2009, 01:42:54 UTC
Thank you! I did make it a little confusing at the start, I know.

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jaydestarlight December 2 2009, 03:02:25 UTC
no problem.
oh, okay then. i was just being captain obvious when stating that, LOL.

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_argustar December 2 2009, 01:53:00 UTC
I really enjoyed this. You did a good job at showing how Lily perceived her parents and the strange circumstances she found herself in.

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monroeslittle December 2 2009, 02:41:17 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you thought so :)

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unalike December 2 2009, 03:12:23 UTC
AMAZING!! I really enjoyed this. one of the best fanfics i've read in a while.

really just ahhh *claps hands*

right more please. i would love to read more from you.

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monroeslittle December 2 2009, 03:19:49 UTC
Thank you! I have a few more ideas for the Twilight genre (all J/B, of course!) floating through my head, so hopefully I'll be inspired enough to write a few more :)

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lovenote23 December 2 2009, 04:02:14 UTC
girl. this is captivating. i couldn't stop reading.

xx you captured the characters so wonderfully...and i love dad!Jake so much..

you rock. legit. :)

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monroeslittle December 2 2009, 05:37:16 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you think so. And in writing this, I've kind of gotten attached to dad!Jake, too -- I want to write more of him!

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