Fic: A Daughter's First Love

[monroeslittle]

Title: A Daughter's First Love
Author: monroeslittle
Genre: Veronica Mars (V/L)
Rating: PG
Summary: A look at five moments in the life of Keith Mars.
A/N: This is for the table challenge of round six of vmfic_gameon. It was originally supposed to be for the character challenge, but it became more Keith and Veronica centered than Keith and other, so I changed it -- I managed to

Comments

[shanynde]

beautiful. Absolutly beautiful.

[monroeslittle]

Thanks!

[celtic_flicka]

Aw, your ending made me cry! Nice job.

[monroeslittle]

Thank you :)

[silverponies]

This is really adorable, I love it.

[monroeslittle]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

[onceuponapillow]

That was absolutely great. I loved Keith's interactions with Veronica & Logan. And that last scene was heartbreaking.

....oh, and part of me wants to kick your butt. I've been mulling over writing a fic exactly like this to go with a song I like. Guess that dream is dead now lol

[monroeslittle]

I'm glad you liked it all. And I guess great minds think alike ;) Thanks for the comments!

[p2880]

I love the way you can capture an aspect of a relationship with just a few words!

"It was clear the conversation was over, and she had won."

"the look of adoration Keith remembered on Stosh Piznarski's face was nothing compared to the look on Logan Echolls's at that moment."

"You can fix it for me later, baby," Logan told her, "And I'll leave the ponytails in, okay?"

[monroeslittle]

Thanks very much! I take that as a big compliment :)