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monkeyonthelam

White Collar Fic: A Friend

Feb 05, 2012 20:26

Title: A Friend
Rating: G
Pairings: possible Neal/Sara
Length: 300 words
Spoilers: Everything before Countdown
Author's Note 1: I was looking through my wip folder and I found a few sentences about what Sara what might be thinking after the first half of the season. Since she is coming back tomorrow and since the new canon will undoubtedly supplants ( Read more... )

white collar, fanfic

Comments 8

sleepygoof8784 February 6 2012, 02:12:31 UTC

This is so lovely. It makes me yearn for this to be what actually happens. I love this and want to wrap it up and hold it close like something fragile. I really want this to be what happens. :)

monkeyonthelam February 6 2012, 02:30:06 UTC

Thank you for reading and responding so quickly. The wait for the first comment on a fic is always the longest. If Neal can't be together Peter and Elizabeth on screen he should at least be able to get with Sara.

katylyn89 February 6 2012, 03:14:27 UTC

Yes! I love this beyond words. Sara has done so many great things for Neal. Mozzie sees what he wants to see and doesn't see how much Neal needs NY and the the Burkes and Sara.

monkeyonthelam February 6 2012, 03:20:02 UTC

If Elizabeth didn't have that emotional hold on Mozzie I don't know where we would be. Thank you for reading and commenting.

medea_fic February 7 2012, 07:37:01 UTC

This is a lovely little character study - I like the idea that Sara can see through Neal's barriers (and his face!) to the person he really is. And Sara herself seems really brave, since she's not prepared to just walk away.

monkeyonthelam February 7 2012, 21:05:55 UTC

I like the idea too. That's why I wrote the fic. I am glad you enjoyed it.

lionessvalenti February 13 2012, 16:51:54 UTC

I like this, though it doesn't strike me as a Sara character study as much as being a Neal character study from an outside perspective. Which is totally legit, even if it's more of a Sara fic about Neal than a Sara fic about Sara. But I really like the conclusions drawn in this story. It's very nice and sweet.

monkeyonthelam February 13 2012, 17:41:06 UTC

Writting this was kind of a spur of the moment thing. I didn't really care about creating a narrative thread as much as I did just putting words on the screen. That's why I didn't cross post it to any of the fic communities. I call it my Sara fic because I basically but my thoughts about the character into triple drabble form which is more meta than fic.

Enough of my babbling. Thanks for reading and commenting.