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Somewhere Back in Time 13/21

Jun 10, 2013 01:16

Title: Somewhere Back in Time (chapter 13)
Author: rose_of_pollux
Rating: eventual PG13
Summary: Sequel to Red Sky. Mr. Zero had promised that it wasn't over. Now, he's ready to inflict more misery upon our heroes as they find themselves on the run again--through the very depths of the space-time continuum ( Read more... )

character: micky, character: peter, character: mike, character: mr zero, genre: adventure, character: davy, author: rose of pollux, rating: pg-13, genre: drama

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insaneladybug June 10 2013, 14:08:25 UTC

LOL, Mike's crazy disguise. And actually thinking it would work. **snerk.**

I love Davy running after Mike before Micky and Peter even notice he's gone. And Jim and Arte cameoing.

That's a real helpful page there, informing Mike he's going to get conked just seconds before it happens.

Yep, that's Pinto and Posey for you. I shouldn't be amused (poor Mike!), but I always get the giggles when Pinto's taunting Jim in the episode. H.M. brings such life to the role. I can just imagine his mad cackling as he leaves Mike to his fate.

What a horrible situation for Mike! And when it's happened to him before, oh gosh.

The scene with Davy is squeeable and cute. LOL, the Lassie exchange. But a literal cliffhanger ending for the boys!

rose_of_pollux June 10 2013, 18:54:49 UTC

LOL, yep.

I had a lot of fun with that scene in the saloon. And cameos are fun.

And that is why you're generally not supposed to read about your own future. Because once you read it, it has to happen.

Ahhh, so relieved they turned out to be IC. Yeah, I figured Pinto would take some sort of sadistic pleasure in what he was doing to Mike. I have you and your wonderful characterizations of him and Posey to thank for being such a good guide!

*hugs him*

Davy to the rescue, indeed. Heh, I've gotten pretty good response for the Lassie joke; that was fun to put in.

Thanks!

insaneladybug June 10 2013, 20:09:55 UTC

I love that Pinto was aware they were watching and listening, too.

Interesting. I could see how it would make sense in some cases, like if there was something you were supposed to do in your future. Then once you'd read about it, you'd worry about making sure you got it done. But it's rather amusing to imagine a world where even things you can't control will happen once you've read them.

Pinto definitely would! I'm glad you enjoy the characterizations; they're so fun to write for.

LOL.