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Before the One You Serve (Sam/Brady | NC-17)

May 02, 2014 22:27

title: Before the One You Serve
author: monicawoe
recipient: delanach
word-count: ~5,000 words
characters: Sam, Brady, Dean
genre: angst
warnings: blood-drinking, demonic powers, voyeurism
story summary: When Dean comes to get Sam at Stanford, he finds him living with Brady. And Dean doesn't trust Brady, even though he can't quite put his finger on why. Not at ( Read more... )

brady, sam winchester, antichristmas, sammessiah

Comments 27

thursdaysisters May 3 2014, 02:51:06 UTC

Fuck. YEAH. Whoo that was one awesome ride, I couldn't put this down!

monicawoe May 3 2014, 21:45:34 UTC

Thanks so much! The second I saw the prompt I knew I had to write it out ; )

reggie11 May 3 2014, 04:34:50 UTC

Holy shit, that was good! I do love me a good boy king!sam and his general!dean, and this was SO good.

But this line But he didn't stop it, he couldn't stop it because Dean's the one that started it and everyone breaks. Brilliant. So many people forget that it was Dean who started the apocalypse by selling his soul and breaking the first seal. They just blame Sam. They were both manipulated. One to break the first and the other to break the last. Thanks for acknowledging it.

monicawoe May 3 2014, 21:59:44 UTC

So glad you enjoyed the read! the boy king is always happiest with his general, isn't he ; )

So many people forget that it was Dean who started the apocalypse by selling his soul and breaking the first seal. They just blame Sam. They were both manipulated. One to break the first and the other to break the last.
Very true!

manzanita_crow May 3 2014, 08:05:50 UTC

Coooooollll!

monicawoe May 3 2014, 22:08:12 UTC

Glad you liked it! This was a fun prompt : D

Hail Monicawoe, Princess of Darkness! cassiopeia7 May 3 2014, 10:44:09 UTC

Wow. You have surpassed yourself. So beautifully dark, even before the end, but the last handful of paragraphs took my breath away. Boy King!Sam and Cain!Dean, laying waste to the world? WANT.

Such gorgeous imagery, too:
Dean looks up at his brother and sees that crown again, white and yellow light with flames curving up around the edges like thorns.

If ever a scene cried out for the Q touch . . .

monicawoe May 3 2014, 22:10:54 UTC

Princess of Darkness!
Ha! Thank you for the title. Had you seen me today at the zoo in my orange flowery tank top with pigtails, wearing my daughter's butterfly backpack you would've known just how appropriate it is ; )

Boy King!Sam and Cain!Dean, laying waste to the world? WANT.
Who doesn't? It is a wonderfully horrifying thought isn't it? : D

tifaching May 3 2014, 19:56:28 UTC

Gah, John's list. Sad but plausible, especially with Brady in Sam's life corrupting him instead of Jess aiming for normal. And the vision Sam shows Dean. Perfect visuals to make his point. Gorgeously written as always.

monicawoe May 3 2014, 22:14:01 UTC

Gah, John's list. Sad but plausible, especially with Brady in Sam's life corrupting him instead of Jess aiming for normal.
Totally. I really love the idea of Brady influencing Sam early on (or any demon really, but Brady we know was there at Stanford)

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed the visuals and the read!