Comments | mona1347: SPN fic: "Death's Other Kingdom"

mona1347

SPN fic: "Death's Other Kingdom"

Jul 24, 2006 23:33

Title: Death's Other Kingdom
Author: mona1347
Word Count: 1,655
Rating/Warnings: This is horror. No porn (sorry! *dodges thrown stones*) but lots of violence and what can best be called "mind rape." The concept of Wincest is referenced but neither confirmed nor denied.
Spoilers: Through Devil's Trap, touching on Shadow and Scarecrow.

A/N: What the hell is ( Read more... )

fic, supernatural

Comments 71

lemmealone July 25 2006, 04:39:49 UTC

Oh... ouch. I was slammed with unexpected sympathy for Meg in DT, and this just makes things even more horrifying. What an awful thing to happen.

mona1347 August 19 2006, 20:53:38 UTC

Eee, me too! The second that scene aired, I knew I'd be writing fic about real!Meg. Just...horrifying.

Thank you so much! :D

tabaqui July 25 2006, 05:10:13 UTC

Oooh, yeah. Man. That's hard and horrible and nasty and just *perfect*

mona1347 August 19 2006, 20:52:37 UTC

*beams* Thank you so much! "Hard and horrible and nasty" were just what I was going for... :D

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mona1347 August 19 2006, 23:15:09 UTC

and of course you made her likeable inthe meantime

LOL I do seem to do that to you all the time, don't I? *pets* I have to say that makes me very happy - probably the best compliment I could get.

Thank you so much! :D

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and_the_damned July 25 2006, 07:51:14 UTC

whooooo, that was creepy....creepy and fantastic

mona1347 August 19 2006, 23:15:43 UTC

*beams* Thank you so much!

mona1347 August 19 2006, 23:28:01 UTC

Again, I am late in replying but...

Several people in my family and close friends have MS and I have arthritis, so the idea of my body kind of betraying me has always scared the bejuses out of me.
Oh wow, yes. The concept of one's "self", either mental or physical, not being under one's own control is just terrifying to me. My mother died from kidney disease when I was 19. My whole adolescent world-view was shifted by watching her body slowly break down, organ by organ, and betray her. I have depression and anxiety issues, both of which manifest with very physical symptoms for me, and it's just constantly frustrating. So thank you for that - nothing makes me happier than when I feel like someone's really got what I was trying to say under the surface, so it means an enormous amount to me. *beams*

Also:
I don't normally like first person so much, but your use of it really enhances the story.
YAY! \o/ This just came out in 1st person. The first line to echo around in my head and demand to be written was "I wake up in Chicago" and I ( ... )

iamthedirtgirl July 25 2006, 12:37:36 UTC

oh girl, take another bow because this was perfect. I would never in my life have believed I would want to read meg fic, but this is the story I would have picked if asked. Because like you in that last scene I connected into her. I went from hating the character (and really even the actress, though the more evil she got I liked her more)to feeling such sadness for her. She managed in just a few sentences to show us an entirely different person and that person made my heart cry for her and suddenly I wanted her to live. It was something to wonder about, I did, ya know, what she went through, what she was present for and what she wasn't. The fact that she thanked them telling so much. And then you wrote this and filled in some of those blanks. So effectively expressing the horror of not having control of your own body, of having to know you've killed and killed, of having to experience a rape, and being dying brutally and still going. You made it all so, ok I have no words for how you made this except good and damn and awesome ( ... )

mona1347 August 21 2006, 00:26:57 UTC

Oh honey, thank you so much!! It's a real shame I take so damn long to respond to these comments ( ... )

iamthedirtgirl August 21 2006, 04:03:54 UTC

yes. I kind of backed off of LJ. My own issues with anti-depressents (lack of) sent me into a tailspin and kinda put me in a bad place. really, really bad. I contacted my doc to get back on and am hoping to be feeling better(as in not wanting to die every second of the day) very soon. I did read the hustler fic(loved it) just wasn't up to feedback. Will go back and re read when my head is clear and give good feedback on all of your stuff. I haven't been reading as much fic, but have made sure to keep current with you and some others that I just love beyond words. take care hon. talk soon.

mona1347 August 21 2006, 13:10:22 UTC

Aw sweetie. I get that. You know I get that A LOT. I really hope all goes smoothly and you get back on the right meds ASAP. Take care, don't worry about feedback, just enjoy the fic and let it bring a little light. *hugs*

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