"a selfish person." (erasure poetry; Final Fantasy VII/none)

Dec 10, 2011 17:17

Title: “a selfish person.”
Fandom: None, although the original was Final Fantasy VII, and you can still probably see it.
Characters/Pairings: Cloud/Aerith, if you squint.
Genre: Poetry, drama
Rating: PG
Word Count: 115
Notes: I did this piece of erasure shortly after I signed up for erasureathon. The original is fatalnocturne's "But Everywhere". Contains an accompanying ( Read more... )

@poetry, [fandom] none, @art, [status] complete, [rating] pg, [length] 0-500 words, [genre] drama, [fandom] final fantasy vii

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alice_pike January 14 2012, 22:49:45 UTC
Ooooo, this is really, really pretty. It flows very nicely and the art complements it well.

You asked for him, because
you wanted, in a moment of
selfishness (human that you are),
a future with him.

None of these wishes ever came true

That is particularly beautiful, and I love the empty parenthetical in there. Poetry is so freakin' awesome, yo.

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xenoamorist January 15 2012, 07:31:13 UTC
:D Thank you! Poetry is awesome; I'm thankful for erasureathon sparking my interest in poetry again.

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