Comments | momentane: “Between Two Points” (Doctor Who; Amy, Rory; Amy/Rory)

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“Between Two Points” (Doctor Who; Amy, Rory; Amy/Rory)

Jan 15, 2012 02:00

Title: “Between Two Points”
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters/Pairings: Amy Pond, Rory Williams; Amy/Rory (Ma'am/Captain Williams)
Genres: First time, courtship, PW-a-little-bit-of-P, slight AU
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,910
Challenge: insmallpackages, “Ficlet, Doctor Who, Amy/Rory - sexy shenanigans between "M'aam" and "Captain Williams"”
Summary: She’s always been ( Read more... )

[char] dw: amy pond, [genre] romance, [status] complete, [genre] first time, [char] dw: rory williams, [fandom] doctor who, @prose, [rating] nc-17, [pairing] dw: amy/rory, [length] 2501-5000 words, [genre] au, [challenge] insmallpackages

Comments 13

meatball42 January 30 2012, 23:27:24 UTC

This story was really nice, but the formatting was really distracting. I'd love to read it again without tripping over the quotation marks. Besides that, great fic!

xenoamorist February 19 2012, 17:23:53 UTC

Oh man, this comment disappeared under all my other e-mails. I'm glad you liked it! Now by the quotation marks, did you mean the slanted quotes (“”) instead of straight quotes ("") tripped you up?

meatball42 February 21 2012, 02:59:56 UTC

No, sorry, it must have been my computer that was reading it wrong, cause it's fine on my iPod. Just read it again, though; liked it even more without the distraction! I especially love tway you wrote the time distortion, it gave it a really out of head feel.