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mollysixx

Round Character Notes and the Pantsu

Oct 09, 2007 23:29

HERE I AM ONCE AGAIN. Finally I have a plausible reason to post something. It's been so long, and who'd have thought that the first real post would turn out to be 991 words. I for one am proud but must place some quick warnings. This is a post on some notes I've picked up in literature class. Now they aren't actual patented notes, but things I've ( Read more... )

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helzfyah October 10 2007, 06:14:29 UTC

i started reading (will finish tomorrow!) but is this school stuff? lol - Mr. pantsu sounds interesting!!)

OH MY! mollysixx October 10 2007, 20:19:51 UTC

I know this has nothing to do with my post but I LOVE YOUR PICTURE!!! It's so adorable and I think the most eye catching I've seen yet, next to the black woman and guy one that you have. WOW!!!

And nope it's not really for school, but sort of somtehing I discovered whilst in school.

helzfyah October 11 2007, 04:56:14 UTC

Ne, Ana - on further reading Mr. Pantsu is a bit disturbing.

I think I understand what you're looking at here (Using Gatsby, which I've read as an example helped XD). I want you to talk to me about this though - I think i need to hear it for me to fully grasp it (aka - I be slow!)

hyperion_quest November 4 2007, 06:03:47 UTC

ok so i am lazy and late but i was talking to you while you made the post so it be cool ne? also i was too lazy after getting to the bottom of the post to go back to the top to comment so that's why i'm replying to bri's comment.

so yosh, actual comment now. I told you mr. pantsu was kowai from morning nuh sempai. see what he turned into. i must say though, nice touch with the cutting his keys into his palm. i winced when i read it.

just from that example alone i got such a clear picture of mr. pantsu all his facets. he even has a physical image for me know. i think this is what my prof has been trying to get us to do but without saying it outright cause he's not a literature teacher. I also have the perfect piece to employ this strategy to. i won't be able to show as many facets as i want to because i have to write in first person and because of length constraints but you'll definitely be seeing something of the round character in my pieces from now on.

Arigatou as always for your wonderful tips and notes