Oh, that was just lovely. From the surprise songs to Frank's glowing, to the hot, hot sex. Seriously good writing, and I can't believe I have to stop here again, and go away! I WILL finish this tonight, dammit!
Two more small catches, if you want to fix them:
the mic frosted over when Frank reached out to put wrap his hand around
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Two more small catches, if you want to fix them:
the mic frosted over when Frank reached out to put wrap his hand around
but every once in a while a lyricist got suck
Again, I hope this doesn't bother you.)
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