Luxuria part eleven

[mojavedragonfly]

Disclaimers in part one.

Comments

[devohoneybee]

eep! and me with limited net access for the next 2 weeks!

[mojavedragonfly]

:-) I bet you'll be checking email. I'll email the ending to you.

[devohoneybee]

cool! thanks! use the earthlink one? *smoooches you*

[mojavedragonfly]

Got it!

[slpa]

Very, very good. Poor Henry. First he breaks his arm so that Mike can drink, and then he has Mike shoot him, so that he can't kill him. Not a great day. Hope the "No Trespassing" sign on Vicki goes away after this. Would make for a better end to the day.

new chapter

[longlostnite]

While I say thank you, thank you for the chapter, you do have a bit of an evil streak, keeping me hanging! Can't wait for more!

Re: new chapter

[mojavedragonfly]

And thank you, thank you for reading and commenting.

Yep, that's me. An evil hanger of cliffs. Or something.

Re: new chapter

[longlostnite]

For the sake of getting the next chapter asap, I'm just gonna go with evil hanger of cliffs on that one!

[songfire3]

I'm completely with longlostnite on this - marvelous chapter! Also, you are evil - I hate cliffhangers! LOL

[mojavedragonfly]

Thanks!

I love cliffhangers. :-) They keep the pace up. They are hard on readers when they're reading serially, like this, but in a finished story they make it a page-turner.

cliffhangers

[longlostnite]

I know-I love to write them. I have a love/hate relationship with reading them, though.

[cjjade]

As a writer I love cliffhangers as a reader I hate them. But this was one of the best cliffhangers I have read in a while. Can't wait to see the next part.

[mojavedragonfly]

Thanks!

It's coming up.