Luxuria part five

[mojavedragonfly]

Disclaimers in part one.

Comments

[marag]

Oooooh, interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next :)

[mojavedragonfly]

Thanks! I am enjoying this one.

[slpa]

OMG, you stopped at "I'll show you," he said, his smile broadening, and he carried her to his bedroom." You tease, you. Great story. Please keep going. Looking forward to the rest of the story. I just hope Coreen or Mike doesn't interrupt Vicki & Henry with a phone call.

[mojavedragonfly]

I just hope Coreen or Mike doesn't interrupt Vicki & Henry with a phone call.

Heh. Funny you should say that...

[slpa]

I thought that might be the case. I just hope Henry gets himself a little more under control, otherwise whoever calls is going to get their head bitten off, hopefully not literally.

[vamplala]

Awwww man! Why did you have to stop Vicki and Henry? It was just getting good! Keep going! Cant wait! :D

[mojavedragonfly]

:D

[cbtreks]

Wow, what a place to stop! (Both with Vicki and Henry and with Mike and the suspect.) Still enjoying this.

[mojavedragonfly]

You know, I was thinking, if I had a "good" place to stop, then I would have failed to write a page-turner, at least at that point. *g* I kind of thought part four suffered from being a good place to stop, I may have to go back and work on that. (But then, someone called it a cliffhanger, which I didn't see, but it cheered me up.)

[huneybfly]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[mojavedragonfly]

That serious, huh? More coming soon, I promise.

[slpa]

How soon? Going into withdrawal again? Love the story!!

[mojavedragonfly]

Aw, thanks. Part six is close to done. I will have a delay while I get the sex scenes beta'd. I so rarely write those that I am afraid of embarrassing myself. But maybe today or tomorrow.