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claudia603 December 4 2011, 13:47:33 UTC
*applauds* Now that was an orgy to beat all orgies!!! Excellent job!

Seriously, I loved how you captured the characters of all of them. And did it with pron. Lots of it!

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moit December 6 2011, 12:00:59 UTC
*bows*

Thank you so much. I was very conscious to make sure I gave each of the characters their own personality. I didn't just want it to be 5 people having sex. I'm glad that came across well.

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verangel December 4 2011, 14:43:53 UTC
That was *shudders* freakin HOT!!! I was cracking up when Casey called Stan to say he left his panties at his place but said it to Stokely. The unraveling of it all was brilliant (you didn't need a beta or reread...it was great). Casey the not so innocent got exactly what he wanted and more. I doubt this will be a one time deal. I think I will reread it for ya. heehee hugs xoxoxoxo v

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moit December 6 2011, 12:01:42 UTC
:D Thank you darling! Casey definitely got what he wanted . . and probably more. haha

Your icon is adorable, by the way.

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naemi December 4 2011, 18:50:03 UTC
Ooooooh AWESOME! I laughed so hard at first, but then oh my...
You're such a talented writer; how you captured them (just as claudia says) - I actually pictured them the whole time which is not always the case (rarely, actually) when I read a story. But yeah. Could be perfectly taken out of the NC-17 version of the movie script :-P

Bla ^.^

I daresay I love you for this one!

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moit December 6 2011, 12:02:21 UTC
Thank you so much! I wish RobRod would have put this into the script. *snicker*

Thanks for reading!!

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naemi December 6 2011, 12:20:00 UTC
Holy yay, he should have. Definitely so.

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aliensouldream December 4 2011, 22:17:20 UTC
Wow!!! That was so incredibly sexy and funny! I think you tapped right into my Casey's most feverish dreams and made it all come true! It felt like an simmering bubble of tension that just had to end with them all getting steamy with each other. I wouldn't be surprised if it was a side effect of near death or the connectedness of the aliens but this is has no downside as far as I can see :-)

So funny when Casey had the thong mix up! And I think you invented a new phrase or genre with 'double-date-dash'. A dash of Zeke? I think he was a whole helping!

Quite frankly, I don’t think anyone would believe it, even if someone did tell.”

I never realised before what a good cover that would be for the most outrageous things. It's totally a reason they should keep doing this. In ever changing combinations :-)

Thanks for this sweet-dream maker!!

(And if you posted this at Secret Challenge time and I missed it cos of the fic-journal fail thing, my huge apologies! Thanks for re-posting)

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moit December 6 2011, 12:00:00 UTC
I can't believe you missed this! LOL This was the epic orgy I threatened!

I'm so glad you enjoyed this though. :)

Dude the truth is like the best cover, though. Look someone dead in the face and say, "I write porn about the movie The Faculty," and they'll laugh at your "joke." Seriously.

People don't want to ever believe the truth.

I should write more double-date-dash, then, yeah? Heh.

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thefrenchgirl2 December 5 2011, 17:39:54 UTC
Holy sh*t... This was fabulous! *gulps*

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moit December 6 2011, 12:00:09 UTC
*grin* Thank you!

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