Sprite (Josh/Elijah) NC-17

[moit_fics]

Title: Sprite
Author: moit
Summary: Elijah begs Josh to be his first. Unsurprisingly, Josh relents.
Pairing: Josh/Elijah
Fandom: Faculty RPF
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance, smut
Warnings: slash, first-time
Author's Note: This is for my not-so-sekrit lover, honeyandvinegar. Love you, babe!
Word Count: 3,005

Comments

[addie71]

I usually prefer C/Z, but this is done so beautifully I can't help but love it, thanks Moit!

The little sprite that was, for all intensive purposes, still just a 17-year-old in an adult world. A little boy who had never been kissed, never had a childhood, never had a chance to explore his sexuality growing up.

Life always seemed to be running at the speed of light for Elijah. The boy would be 70 before he was 30. If Josh could do anything to change that, even for an evening, he would. ~~ *happy sighs*

[moit]

Thank you for giving it a try. (And really, if you squint, it's Casey/Zeke.) ;)

I'm so happy you enjoyed this -- it was a lot of fun to write.

[gabi_fics]

RPS is hard for me to read, but I couldn't resist the smut :)

This was warm and tender and gentle and all kinds of boyish goodness. I enjoyed it immensely.

[moit]

Thank you so much. :) Just find/replace all the Josh and Elijahs and turn them into Zeke and Caseys. It works nearly the same. lol

Thanks for reading, dear!

[honeyandvinegar]

(I've been trying to comment for forty minutes. I hatehatehatehate this computer...)

*eyecross* So... soooo pretty, lovely and lovING. :D We ALL know that Josh is a sap for beautiful things, and you did that up in spaaaaades.

The boy was so beautiful; it was practically heartbreak just to look at him. *happy bittersweet sigh* He's gone. So, so, gone...

“Tell me when you want me to start moving,” he said gently, placing soft kisses over Elijah’s delicate collarbone and smoothing his hands up and down the boy’s flanks. *MOAR sighs* Delicate!Lij gets to me every time, lol! Josh so tall, lean-muscled, touching his sweet, sweet boy... ohhh Christ.

Josh gentled him with a kiss behind his ear. “I know. It doesn’t always happen the first time. You sure you don’t want me to try?”

“I’m sure,” Elijah whispered, framing Josh’s face in his hands and kissing him soundly. After this, Lij is SO gonna be ready for anything. It'll be Josh's turn to get freaked, expert-smexy!Lij tangling him up into pretzels. :D

[moit]

*squeezes you tight* I'm so glad you loved this.

I'm just trying to give you a smidgen of what I feel having your LIBRARY of fic to read.

This was probably (in my opinion) my best smut-piece. *nods* True story, my friend.

And uh.. I'm kinda already planning the sequel around this line: After this, Lij is SO gonna be ready for anything. It'll be Josh's turn to get freaked, expert-smexy!Lij tangling him up into pretzels. :D

[honeyandvinegar]

NUGHNNUGHGH!!! OHHHH MAN. Sequel. You do a sequel to this you get the DEED TO ME. And you don't even hafta do a horse to get it! ;););)

[moit]

you don't even hafta do a horse to get it!

Well, only someone made of PURE EVIL would make me do a horse!!!! That's just crossing the line between normal pervert and SICK FUCK WHO SHOULD BE LOCKED UP!!!!

Mmmm I'm gunna start the sequal RIGHT NOW. Get those ownership papers ready!

YOU'RE MINE!

[lijahlover]

*Happy sighs* This was beautiful just so amazing. You write Elijah as I see him pretty and delicate the kind you just want to hug and protect.

And this was brilliant!

Life always seemed to be running at the speed of light for Elijah. The boy would be 70 before he was 30. If Josh could do anything to change that, even for an evening, he would.

[moit]

Thank you so much dear.

I'm quite fond of this story, myself.

[aliensouldream]

Wow, this was superhot! It was realistic, which gave a piquancy to the sex and the mood. Josh's scruples gave him credit but basically he's made for this, all lazy effortless godliness and hot cherrypicking goodness. Beside him, you paint this beautiful shy-curious man-child. The boy was so beautiful; it was practically heartbreak just to look at him. The attraction between the polar opposites is so well done. And even with the strong sexuality, there is sympathy and tenderness and a character fascination that goes beyond the sex. Just beautiful. Part 2 - yes please!

[moit]

This was probably the nicest comment I've ever gotten -- thank you so much. I'm so pleased I could convey their emotions and personalities so well. Part two is on the way.

Thanks again!