I would break up the lines a bitnightrainNovember 2 2006, 19:14:56 UTC
White streaked ash falls in the not so distant sky. Deeper, covering the frozen wasteland of my mind. The beating of my heart fades further into the dark, Never ceasing, only hiding from the light. I grow weary of this cold November day. When shall I next see the sun? I think it will be long yet. Blind eyes, cold heart, eternal longing. This is where I exist, Till the end comes. So cold now, If only you were here.
proof crap... *SIGH*cstmpkgFebruary 21 2007, 16:33:07 UTC
so apparently a post can be as long as you want it but a comment can only be like 4000 characters long, go figure... so my journal has what i have of a paper up, proofing would be great if you can manage it, hell stick stuff in there if you think it will make it better. i don't think the teacher actually reads them anyway... shrug thanks ej oh yeah
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Deeper, covering the frozen wasteland of my mind.
The beating of my heart fades further into the dark,
Never ceasing, only hiding from the light.
I grow weary of this cold November day.
When shall I next see the sun?
I think it will be long yet.
Blind eyes, cold heart, eternal longing.
This is where I exist,
Till the end comes.
So cold now,
If only you were here.
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so my journal has what i have of a paper up, proofing would be great if you can manage it, hell stick stuff in there if you think it will make it better. i don't think the teacher actually reads them anyway...
shrug
thanks ej
oh yeah
Nathanial Hawthorne sucks balls...
the end.
^_^
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