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modestroad

To Batman we trust (PG-13)

Sep 30, 2009 14:18

Title: To Batman we trust
Characters: Barbara, Batman (Barbara/Batman if you squish hard enough)
Claim: Barbara Gordon
Word Count: 476
Rating: PG-13
A/N: Un'betad. I'm looking for one though. I'm still trying to figure out Barbara's voice, so be nice.

( To Batman we trust )

barbara gordon, dcu_freeforall, fanfic, batman

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modestroad September 30 2009, 19:30:32 UTC

reminds me of the recent "Oracle - the cure" comics in tone

That was my aim. *nods* Not so sure that I've achieve that, but hey! I can try again. :)

Thanks for reading.

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modestroad September 30 2009, 19:32:58 UTC

:) Thank you. Bruce was easy. lol I had a problem with Barbara, but Bruce was easy.

dariclone September 30 2009, 21:55:26 UTC

This was very nice. I like the Bruce/Barbra pairing and you did a nice job of it.
By the way, I think you meant for your title to be *"In*" Batman We Trust not "Too."

modestroad October 1 2009, 10:50:07 UTC

See? That's why I need a beta! Well, I do have a beta but I don't send her fics under 500 words *is ashamed*

I'm glad you like it! :D

dariclone October 1 2009, 12:29:48 UTC

Aww, don't be ashamed. It was good and you didn't know. :)

modestroad October 1 2009, 12:38:14 UTC

*hug* Thank you, but I think from now on I'll send her my fics no matter what :)

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modestroad October 1 2009, 10:59:10 UTC

Babs! I love her to pieces! *hugs her*

I still have my doubts about her voice though. She's kinda hard to write using first person. So far people say that it sounds like Babs so maybe is just me.

dragonbat2006 September 30 2009, 23:19:59 UTC

Excellent! You've really got Babs' voice sounding right. And Bruce's!

modestroad October 1 2009, 11:00:12 UTC

Thank you! Like I said to a previous comment, Bruce was easy to write. lol

btw your icon is mad <3!!!