Ficlet: Apple pies and advices (Bruce Wayne, Damian Wayne), PG

Nov 14, 2010 23:58

Title: Apple pies and advices
Characters: Bruce Wayne, Damian Wayne, Alfred Pennyworth
Rating: PG
Word count: 428
Disclaimer: Characters aren't mine.
A/N: A huge thanks to reginalibintia for her beta work. You are the best! This is for my #66-writer's choice prompt from my dcu_freeforall table.
Warnings: N/A
Summary: Sometimes Bruce needs a kick in the butt.

Apple pies and advices )

dcu_freefor all, alfred pennyworth, damian wayne, pg, bruce wayne, ficlet

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munnin_odanin November 14 2010, 22:30:48 UTC
Yes! perfect. I love it. There hasn't been enough Bruce&Damian stuff that shows that balance.

You rock!

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modestroad November 14 2010, 22:39:27 UTC
Ah, thank you. I love Damian and now that Bruce is back I'm curious to see how he's going to treat his son.

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reginalibintia November 15 2010, 01:36:00 UTC
You know I love it, darling! I love that there is that 'Oh, he's like me' aspect to Bruce, and Damian just being excited to be with his Dad, and that little bit of making fun of Dick (because he always deserves it a little), and the fact Barbara and Alfred just know all.

So many smiles :D

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modestroad November 15 2010, 09:57:46 UTC
Damian needs his dad more than Bruce or Dick think. I just hope we'll have a Bruce-Damian scene like the one Tim had with him in Red Robin.

And making fun of Grayson is Damian's hobby :P

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hitokaji November 15 2010, 05:05:50 UTC
Awww--I'm glad Bruce did follow Babs'advice. She knows everything,and what's good for whom. ;)

Love the ending. Gosh, I can't wait to see some interaction/relationship between Bruce and Damian in comic. I'm sure Bruce will do so eventually. He behaves much better since he got back. :)

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modestroad November 15 2010, 10:01:37 UTC
She's Oracle; she knows stuff (to quote Layla from the X-Factor :P )

Yes, Bruce is acting more like a human since he came back. Even Tim admits that so I'm waiting to see how Bruce is going to treat his younger son.

Becuase the boy needs him, especially now.

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aural_stimulatn November 15 2010, 15:17:04 UTC
=D So glad to see that Bruce is acting more like a human these days. This was really cute, I liked it. I love that even from afar, Babs is keeping Bruce accountable for his actions regaring his son!

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modestroad November 15 2010, 20:28:51 UTC
It was about time, don't you think? :)

Ah, Babs...Babs is a lot like Bruce, but unlike Bruce she knows she's only a human and needs her friends and family. And that's why she's better than Bruce :D

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barb1808 November 17 2010, 16:49:29 UTC
I'm not far into the batworld yet anf know even less about Damian in particular but I think this ficlet is very cute.

I like the calm way you let the scene unfold and your style.

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modestroad November 17 2010, 20:30:49 UTC
Damina...you either learn to love him or you're going to hate him forever :P

Thank you. I wanted to write something small and cute :D

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