I will never get tired of saying how much i love your writing! The way you are able to express the bits of emotions in your characters is really great. The nervousness, uncertainty, the maybe yes maybe no, the thought that one may be more invested then the other, and the worry that one little mistake could possibly screw up something that could had been great, all the worries and insecurities that come with getting to know someone, you got them all down perfectly
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Thank you so so much for this comment! Your words make me smile irl. <3
I did try to explore all those uncertainties here and it was fun to do that, but also difficult, especially because it was from Taec's POV. I'm glad it worked out and that you enjoyed it!
That's the thing I like when we get only one POV though, that we keep wondering about the other character(s)' thoughts and that's also something I do try to include in my stories, to keep the reader wondering about things even if I give tips here and there. Each one has their own interpretation, and yours about Junho's actions is possible. :)
Also: "Junho turned around just after he had gone one step up, so he was now a little taller than Taecyeon. “Do as I say and you might be rewarded,” he mumbled just before their lips brushed, the kiss lingering in the shape of a smile on Junho’s face."
Infinite ,':))))) tbh
But this was so good lol. /telescope emoji/ into an even more intimate moment AND a scalp massage.
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I did try to explore all those uncertainties here and it was fun to do that, but also difficult, especially because it was from Taec's POV. I'm glad it worked out and that you enjoyed it!
That's the thing I like when we get only one POV though, that we keep wondering about the other character(s)' thoughts and that's also something I do try to include in my stories, to keep the reader wondering about things even if I give tips here and there. Each one has their own interpretation, and yours about Junho's actions is possible. :)
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts! ♥♥♥
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I LOVE THIS SCENE SO MUCH.
Also: "Junho turned around just after he had gone one step up, so he was now a little taller than Taecyeon. “Do as I say and you might be rewarded,” he mumbled just before their lips brushed, the kiss lingering in the shape of a smile on Junho’s face."
Infinite ,':))))) tbh
But this was so good lol. /telescope emoji/ into an even more intimate moment AND a scalp massage.
You're the best ,':)
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