Day 1 of TTD read-through

[mnfaure]

I took yesterday, as planned, to start reading TTD. And you know what?  I like it. My writing is more than competent; I've moved myself to emotion, and I already know what is going to happen. The pacing is good for the kind of story *I* like.

I had a few surprises--almost first-time reader discoveries--in a few places because I can changed some

Comments

[magicnoire]

*thumbs up*

[frigg]

Bwahahahaha

Nah, seriously, as with all my crits, take what you can use and chuck the rest, and you know I liked TTD AND you know how difficult I am to please. :)

[mnfaure]

*lol* And I hope you know that I would never stop talking to you because of a crit. :D You can't get rid of me that easily. :P