The Bad Snail

[mneme]

This could probably use some more work, as I wrote it straight and didn't bother editing it aside from one line rewrite. But I've found that if I do that, I never go back to things -- so here you are.

(update: and, just to normalize the lines a bit, I've done a quick rewrite...and another rewrite).

The Bad Snail
-- for batshuaCopyright 2012, Joshua

Comments

[chanaleh]

A sestina! My favorite!

[mneme]

It isn't, quite. But yeah, it's a sestinal form.

Thank you!