WOWEE. You did such a great job on this! At first, I thought it would be too OOC for Sunny to want to be dominated, but as I read on, it worked out really well and was believable. I loved all the kinky stuff!! (tee hee) So many great scenes...you got the art bunnies going bonkers...
I enjoy different takes on Bluestreak. This was an absolute delight to read! Considerate, sweet even, and he still managed to be a personality to be reckoned with when the time came. His change in personality is quite believable because he retains that sense of 'Bluestreak' in his actions and most especially in his words.
I must admit, when you introduced the 'safe' word, I was gnawing over the fact that you didn't seem inclined to use it at all. Then you presented it in quite an unexpected way. It worked to portray Blue's feelings right there.
My only real problem with the fic is Sunny letting go of control so easily, it just doesn't match up with with my personal vision of him. *shrug*
I enjoyed reading through this. Thank you for sharing and putting your name it it! :D
Thank you for re-reading it (I'm assuming!) and commenting. I appreciate it!
Well, we all have our visions of the mechs, and while I didn't know it when I began this story, that's my headspace Sunstreaker. I'm glad it doesn't turn you off the story to have a different interpretation of him.
Ah, the safe word. I actually had something similar in mind from the get-go, and I'm so glad to read that it worked for you in reading the story.
*grins* Yeah! I'm relieved that Bluestreak worked! *whew*
Thank you so much for sharing this. Your style is so much fun to read.
I like that Bluestreak is strong, even if it's more behind closed doors here. Too often he's a little whiny, so if you count that as OOC, please, please! OOC him all over the place! C8
The kinks were a delight, X3 and it was fantastic to see something deeper grown from it.
I wasn't sure I'd like this, but I always like your writing, so I gave it a shot. Woah. I was not expecting this! I love how Sunstreaker changes over the course of this fic. I was thrown a bit off-kilter that Bluestreak threw the dominatrix bit at him rather abruptly, but other than that, it felt seamless. Great fic! The raw emotion is powerful and moving and I love it.
And honestly, if Sunstreaker had bridled Blue would have laughed it off and told him he was joking. I'm glad you persevered and enjoyed it in spite of me throwing you off a bit! Thank you for reading and for commenting. I really appreciate it.
You can give the impression of run-on sentences without actually typing them that way! I'm so very thrilled that you liked how I did his monologues. *huggles compliment*
I have a very big grin on my face, NK. Thank you for such a wonderful compliment.
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So many great scenes...you got the art bunnies going bonkers...
Awesome work hon ♥
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I'm so glad you thought this was believable. I worry so much about my ability to characterize.
Of course you loved the kinky stuff! You're so funny...art bunnies? Really? Wow.
Thanks, H. ♥
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I must admit, when you introduced the 'safe' word, I was gnawing over the fact that you didn't seem inclined to use it at all. Then you presented it in quite an unexpected way. It worked to portray Blue's feelings right there.
My only real problem with the fic is Sunny letting go of control so easily, it just doesn't match up with with my personal vision of him. *shrug*
I enjoyed reading through this. Thank you for sharing and putting your name it it! :D
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Well, we all have our visions of the mechs, and while I didn't know it when I began this story, that's my headspace Sunstreaker. I'm glad it doesn't turn you off the story to have a different interpretation of him.
Ah, the safe word. I actually had something similar in mind from the get-go, and I'm so glad to read that it worked for you in reading the story.
*grins* Yeah! I'm relieved that Bluestreak worked! *whew*
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I like that Bluestreak is strong, even if it's more behind closed doors here. Too often he's a little whiny, so if you count that as OOC, please, please! OOC him all over the place! C8
The kinks were a delight, X3 and it was fantastic to see something deeper grown from it.
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If Bluestreak can be a warrior, he can't be a wuss and I don't see him as one. I'm glad someone else agrees!
I'm very glad you liked.
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I have a very big grin on my face, NK. Thank you for such a wonderful compliment.
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