Ohh, I absolutely loved this one, especially because it shows a different side of Jazz. One that's a bit too cocky that can put a dent to his good intentions.
Not to mention those small moments where you see Prowl there looking after his mate, and worrying when something's not going right.
Nice detail here, and not just in the relationship story--everyone seems to miss the fact that sentient computers can just transmit data to one another.
From the fact that it had to be Prime to force a hole in the wall between them where they HAD to see the truth of one another, to finally admitting there's more than a bot that 'gets' to them, its the gradual progression that makes one suspend their belief until the next moment, the next step.
Somebot had to force those two to get along, or they were going to divide the officers corps and Prime would have a mess on his hands. I'm glad you enjoyed the progression so far.
Adding in agreement, that is definitely a different side to the Jazz we usually see, and its intriguing to see. The continued narrative of their past, but from a third person without any of the couple's bias, and still being able to see Prowl there, worrying about Jazz... *flails* <3
Yanno, I thought I had friended you yonks ago...but apparently not! O.O So now I have, and hopefully won't miss any more of your delightful and thoughtful offerings. <3333
That's why I do so well at multi-part challenges. I can tell a long story and a short story at the same time, and I love to pace things out that way. I'm glad you like it, too!
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Not to mention those small moments where you see Prowl there looking after his mate, and worrying when something's not going right.
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Prowl's deeply concerned right then, as any of us would be in a similar situation. It's so easy to write his concern given what I've done to Jazz.
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From the fact that it had to be Prime to force a hole in the wall between them where they HAD to see the truth of one another, to finally admitting there's more than a bot that 'gets' to them, its the gradual progression that makes one suspend their belief until the next moment, the next step.
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Somebot had to force those two to get along, or they were going to divide the officers corps and Prime would have a mess on his hands. I'm glad you enjoyed the progression so far.
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Hey, somebody's got to worry about Jazz.
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Enjoying these, thank goodness for the Cybertronian! <3
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Oh, I'm glad you found them through the newsletter. That's good to hear.
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Yanno, I thought I had friended you yonks ago...but apparently not! O.O So now I have, and hopefully won't miss any more of your delightful and thoughtful offerings. <3333
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