Story: The Card

May 27, 2008 11:58

Title: The Card (Lace)
Series: Love in Small Steps
By: mmouse15
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1600
Pairing: Prowl/Jazz
Author's Notes: For reference, please see here.
This is entry #3 for the May 08 challenge on the ProwlxJazz comm here on LJ.

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prowl, jazz, fanfiction, love in small steps

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mmouse15 May 27 2008, 22:57:28 UTC
Wasn't that fun, how everyone worked together to move Prowl and Jazz into shared quarters? So much fun to write.

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__wilderness__ May 27 2008, 19:34:20 UTC
*grins* Jazz making lace.. who'd have thunk it? The way everyone helps out in fixing the room up and helping distract Prowl. And then Jazz's reaction! Oh my, poor thing... but it was all all right in the end :)

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mmouse15 May 27 2008, 23:00:47 UTC
Jazz is not as confident as he appears, is he? Given that, his reaction is completely understandable. *pets Jazz* So I had to fix it, of course.
The Autobots loved helping Jazz with this, can you tell?
Lace by tatting is actually not that difficult. Well, it can be. Jazz didn't do a complicated pattern, but I thought he'd certainly want to put something he'd made into the card.

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vejiraziel May 27 2008, 19:35:59 UTC
OMG That was absolutely sweet and adorable. I love how Jazz was trully terrified that Prowl could possibly break up with him. And Jazz is right, sometimes a simple word to remind someone else you love them once in a while means as much as the actions.

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mmouse15 May 27 2008, 23:03:41 UTC
Confession time - that scenario was Jay and I once, right before he proposed. I really did think he was breaking up with me, so I could write Jazz in that scene very easily. So, yes, I really understand the power of the spoken word. Prowl had to learn that lesson.
I'm very glad you liked this one.

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purajo May 28 2008, 02:24:50 UTC
Aww dont go scarin' Jazz like that Prowler, especially not after he's done all these nice things for you

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mmouse15 May 28 2008, 02:36:33 UTC
Exactly! No scaring of the beloved, Prowl, it isn't good for the heart/pump.

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dark_daebereth May 28 2008, 14:52:22 UTC
Aaw, that was adorable. Poor Jazz, who would have thought?
I love how you've made it a progressive thing. And hey, it's the blanket!

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mmouse15 May 28 2008, 15:59:27 UTC
The blanket keeps showing up!
Yeah, I couldn't make it a completely smooth road. Jazz got pretty scared.
I'm glad you enjoyed this.

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