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Day 13: Give and Take; House, NC-17

May 13, 2010 23:05

Title: Give and Take
Author: rusted_halo
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: House
Characters/Pairing: Wilson, House/Wilson with goggles at the ready
Word Count: 1140
Summary: Wilson needs to learn to love himself.
Author's Note: Begins at 3x05 "Fools for Love" and follows an alternate time-line beyond 3x22 "Resignation." The dialogue in the opening lines is ( Read more... )

day: 13, fandom: house md, author: zycroft, year: 2010

Comments 4

superseal May 14 2010, 07:59:21 UTC

OM NOM NOM.
:'D

rusted_halo May 15 2010, 05:13:40 UTC

OMG ICON LOVE &hearts

karaokegal September 20 2010, 05:59:53 UTC

Interesting take on the House/Wilson exchange in Fools For Love and I can sort of see Wilson struggling with self-acceptance and porn addiction. I also like that you went to a psuedo House/Wilson without quite crossing the line, although leaving the possiblity open.

I'd actually love to see the AU storyline developed to comport with the last few seasons, even taking Amber and House's break-down into consideration.

On a concrit note, I did find the POV jump in the last three paragraphs to be very jarring.

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karaokegal September 21 2010, 00:41:45 UTC

MMOM is always a bit of a roller-coaster, especially if it's your first challenge. I try not to post anything without at least one lookover from another pair of eyes, although I will cheat on the drabbles. I'm also personally a bit of a psycho when it comes to POV jumps. However, it's still a good piece of work.

No, I've more or less shut my fanfic factory down to work on my Novel and honestly the show itself has imploded so badly that most of what I've written lately has harked back to the first three seasons. (For instance, I just wrote some stalker-chick fic.) And I'm TERRIBLE at long term AU projects.