Comments | mmmmm_angel: Angelus/William: The Lion Will Lay the Lamb 1/1 (Adults Only)

nondenomifan in mmmmm_angel

Angelus/William: The Lion Will Lay the Lamb 1/1 (Adults Only)

Jan 22, 2008 18:19

Author: angelswilliam
Title: The Lion Will Lay the Lamb
Fandom: BTVS/ATS
Ship: Angelus/William
Rating: Adults Only
Genre: M/M slash. WARNINGS for briefly violent noncon, physical/sexual/psychological abuse, blood play, vamp biting, and anal and manual sex.
Word Count: 2586
Spoilers: If you didn't see any of the shows about what Spike and Angel were like back in ( Read more... )

angelus/william, angelus, slash, slash fic

Comments 4

kindredspirit75 January 22 2008, 23:56:31 UTC

You've done well, my darling and I'm especially honored to have been a part of your inspiration to create this wonderful piece.

The exchanges between Angelus and William were well done and you've brought out the relationship between Master and fledgling nicely.

Really enjoyed it, honey. Kudos.

nondenomifan January 23 2008, 05:34:35 UTC

*hugs you* I replied to this generous feedback in my journal.

carinas_carinae January 23 2008, 04:42:00 UTC

Ooh, quite wonderful. I love you use of language to set the scene. Nicely done.

My favorite line? This one: "Was Angelus...purring? We purr?" That was inspired. Really gives a sense of William being very 'green'.

nondenomifan January 23 2008, 05:46:59 UTC

Well, you said 2 things in your feedback that have made my day:
1. You told me I got the language right, which was something I was very unsure about.

2. You liked one of the lines that just kinda popped into my head as something a new vampire would say, and that is exactly how it hit you.

Thank you so much for feeding back! Everything you said helped immensely!