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[mmmdots]

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[anonymous]

[mmmdots]

Thanks for the crit. I'm also not a master of Sandman canon since it's been a few years, so I may not always be completely accurate either. After discussing your comment with my roommate, we came to the decision that you are very right. This is not to say that Delirium never repeats herself, because she does, but more that it's fairly random when she does. I will work on finding new ways to word things so the repetition when it happens isn't as noticeable. I sometimes get a little stuck, or become fond of things like the bubble-blowing and seeing ellipsis dots as Dots. In terms of the latter kind of stuff, do you think it's overused or if I'm tweaking it just enough each time I do that? Given your crit I'm not sure if the tweakability has enough random potential and hope your insight could help me out there.

[anonymous]

[mmmdots]

It does help a lot, and yeah, some scenarios do get repeated. For instance, the dots thing started out as an inside joke with my roommate (we coplay Del at another game) so I love using it, but yeah... shouldn't overdo it. She's just easily distracted. Thank you and I welcome suggestions from people at all times. Del is more fun when she's shared. XD

I'll tell my roomie you said hello. And yes, it does make a lot of scents, sents, cents and sense.