Comments | mmm_brainz: FM July Post II

mmm_brainz

FM July Post II

Jul 19, 2007 22:03

( Lying on your bed // waiting for something to happen // all the while knowing you were meant for something better // feeling it // wanting it // but, uh // how much can you take // before you snap? )

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little_emmo July 20 2007, 16:06:53 UTC

I loved this! I love anything that analyses Sylar/Gabriel and what's going on in his head. Why he is the way he is etc. This is very well written :D

I assumed his father was dead too, though someone above mentioned something about a divorce, hmm i never thought of that :)I may have assumed because when he fixes the clock at his mums he says "it WAS dad's" I would think death rather than divorce even if he is no longer around, but it could be either i guess.

Also OCD, definitely, i mean his place was unber neat and tidy, he even had plastic on his chair! O.o

mmm_brainz July 20 2007, 17:52:19 UTC

They really do leave the father up to interpretation. All we know is he's not there; he could be dead, divorced, have run off when Gabriel was younger... Virginia could have even had him out of wedlock when she was a teenager or something, although she didn't look young enough for that, but... I don't know! I've been making my own theories and building off of them, seeing which one I like best, hehe.

The plastic on the chair was just... so unsettling XD I don't know why; maybe because it's really just unneeded and it's a bit unnerving that he went so far as to cover his furniture in plastic to keep it neatened.

Thank you for the feedback!

meli_64 July 20 2007, 17:08:14 UTC

This was brilliant. Seriously, so Gabe like. Awesome.

mmm_brainz July 20 2007, 17:52:47 UTC

Thank you so much!

airspaniel July 20 2007, 23:17:56 UTC

Gorgeous! I loved every second of it. The sniping, and passive-aggressiveness, and splendid characterization... It was a sheer delight! ^_^

Be eight minutes late to everything instead, bitch.

Love that parting shot. Take that guidance counselors!

damnrap July 24 2007, 09:32:00 UTC

Hello! Sorry to be posting this in a comment to your frankly marvellous fanfic, but I wasn't sure how else to contact you. I'm applying for Dale Smither at hogwarts_hocus, and Sylar's the only character there who she's had contact with. Thus: I inform you. ^^

I don't think that I need to ask permission, from the wording of the rule, but if I do then sorry and consider this a "may I apply?".

P.S. Flattery aside, your writing really is marvellous. :D

mmm_brainz July 24 2007, 15:14:29 UTC

Aww, thank you :)

But... Dah! Oh, man, way too cool! Yeah, of course you can apply XD Dale is so much love. As were her brains >>;

I'm trying to decide if you should have to contact the other characters... I don't think Mr. Bennet would have known about her, and we have Molly, who could have found her if she was given a picture, but she wouldn't have known Dale.

I don't think you should have to! If you want me to nab up all the Heroes-muns e-mails just in case, though, let me know ^^

omgyay :D Dale! *dances*

damnrap July 24 2007, 19:07:22 UTC

\o/!

They were lean and well-spiced, and good to eat rare? xP

Thank'ee! :D Seeing as Dale didn't meet any of the other characters (unless there's an unlisted Mohinder lurking around! O.O), I reckon I'm safe there, but thanks. Her only link to the others is through that looming bloke with the cranial fixation, in fact. I love how Sylar brings all the characters together, don't you? xD

mmm_brainz July 24 2007, 19:19:32 UTC

Ah, yes, they tasted rather of ice cream sundaes with extra whipped cream and sprinkles, and Sylar apr00v'd. Until they gave him a brain freeze D:

Nope, we don't have a Mohinder. YET. Someone's been plotting it, but she hasn't posted the app yet. And, oh, yes, Sylar, he's the great... hero ambassador. Or something. *dies* This is totally going straight to his ego. *kicks him around*

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mynameis_sylar July 26 2007, 00:18:54 UTC

I'm not going to gush about how awesome this is, because big heads, as awesome as they are, tend to make us Sylar-players go "Haaaaa, we know we win. We don't need your silly little comment. Pshaw." BUT, I will say, that this was freaking great. Definitely some of the best Sylar fan!sight I've read in a while. :]

mmm_brainz July 26 2007, 03:32:24 UTC

*dies* I can honestly say that my self-esteem issues will never allow me to be like that XDD But! Thank you, that means a lot! Because I always worry about my Sylar voice and, apparently, ickle!Gabriel is very much a crackhead in my mind. *shrug!*

mynameis_sylar July 26 2007, 03:34:47 UTC

Lmao, I know, I can't do it either. My ego is like..non-existant. xDD And, you're totally welcome. I do the saaaame thing. I always think I'm going to do something wrong, or get the characteur messed up somehow. And, haha, I know that feeling, completely. Ickle!Gabriel just strikes me as a total ass. I don't think it was the sweater vests that pushed all the kids away. Oooh no. x]

mmm_brainz July 26 2007, 03:37:42 UTC

Egos? What are those? XD SYLAR has one to rival the utmost of egos, of course - even though, right now, in my RP community, he's kind of bound to a chair and drugged, but, beside the point! - but mine? Bwah? Not available. GAH, exactly. Characterization is the biggest thing for me EVAR and I don't think I'm ever really happy with any of my characters. Sylar topping that list. XDD The sweater vests made them cautious! But it was the flailing about how much he hates tuna fish and the insults thrown about that made them run for the hills.

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