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mmarinov

Choices: Chapter 7

Apr 20, 2006 20:27

Second last chapter! That's right - I'm pretty sure chapter 8 will be the last, and i'll start writing it as soon as I post this one (I promised I'd finish the story this week and I'm sticking to my word, dangnabbit.) This chapter hasn't been beta-ed so excuse any typos or wonky structuring, but please do point them out if you see any.

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fanfic, my hair, choices chap 7

Comments 63

mellaithwen April 20 2006, 11:10:25 UTC

Damn it Meg's a bitch, bitch bitch bitch. Aww Dean, kill the bitch

Now then, you're a spoiler whore right? Have ya seen the pictures yet? I'm so tempted to look, so very very tempted *falls over in attempt to avoid*

mmarinov April 20 2006, 11:18:36 UTC

Lol, not yet! I too am resisting! I'm wringing my hands and pulling my hair, but so far my resistence is standing. I'm trying to make this the one time ... ever ... lol, that I don't spoil it for myself - it's the only way my mind will walk into the ep all blank-slated non-expectations-y. Though, I admit, I did see one of Dean. though it was a non spoilery one.Just him standing with a rip in his jeans (though i'm prett sure that was more fashion than, you know, having been ripped into :P) Do you think you'll break soon and look?

mellaithwen April 20 2006, 11:20:49 UTC

I'm shaking :| the site is open all I have to do is look...WHAT DO I DO?! the only thing I've seen (and still looking at) is the thumbnail on emedian.net's main page, but dare I look at more?! Oh mother of hell, how the crap are we going to make it to the finale?! I have a french exam the day before ffs *groan*

mmarinov April 20 2006, 11:25:57 UTC

Lol, just hold on, you know, for a few more weeks, lol - You can do it! *cheers with imaginery pompoms* If you see 'em, as a fanfic writer you won't be able to avoid coming up with scenarios to match and you know you 'll be dissapointed when the ep airs...so you must resist! Lol - and stop consuming anything with caffeine in it! Plus, if you see 'em, you'll post them, and then *I'll* have an even harder time resisting with your post right there on my friends page!
And french? Ick, poor you - I know lots of ppl who started studying that later in post-highschool years only to drop out in despair...not to dishearten you or anything ;)

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allstar12 April 20 2006, 14:28:56 UTC

Awesome chapter. Meg's a freaking biatch. Dean, needs to kick her ass. STAT. And John, WTF John. I dont like you right now.

“Yes,” the girl said, nodding emphatically. “You’re BIG.” That's adorable, I'd probably say that to him too, after recovering from the shock that he'd be standing right in front of me.

mmarinov April 20 2006, 14:37:35 UTC

Hehe, compared to, like, a 5-year old, Sam would look like a giant, lol. He towers over Jensen and that boy aint small.

If Jared was standing right there in front of me, I'd probably ask him to marry me and then go onto the big thing, lol.

allstar12 April 20 2006, 14:44:06 UTC

Sam would be a jungle gym to a child, LOL. A five year old would have a field day with him.

I'd probably, do something stupid like ask to see his Texas belt, or touch his hair, or just ask him to smile XD

mmarinov April 20 2006, 14:54:33 UTC

Hehe, ask to touch his hair! That's a good one, I'll remember that if by some miracle I open my front door one day and he's standing there ;)

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choasangel April 20 2006, 15:27:37 UTC

Meg certainly is a piece of work, isn't she?! What a bitch, hiding that thing in the house of an innocent family. Loved Dean trying to pretend to be asleep, and Sam catching that he wasn't. Don't blame Dean for not wanting to sleep when there was a Freddy Kruger thing out there wanting to get him. Interesting that the marks faded. Cannot wait to see what Meg's next move is. Cannot believe that I almost missed this chapter. Well maybe not almost missed ( ... )

mmarinov April 20 2006, 16:01:29 UTC

Aw, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! And I aim to keep ppl on their toes, muaha ( ... )

choasangel April 20 2006, 16:16:13 UTC

I've seriously been thinking of just buying season two DA, since he's in it. I never really got into it, mostly because I work nights a lot and well I had a hard time finding it. Damn networks moving shows around. Killed one of my fav shows. But that's all right now own season one of Poltergeist: the Legacy. But yeah, I've looked into pricing for DA and after my little vaction with the inlaws to Curaco(may have spelled that way wrong. It's an island of the coast of S. America by Aruba.) I'll probably buy it. I want season 4 of Smallville too. Debating on buying Devour since I can't find it at the vid store. But I want to make sure it's okay before I buy it...though I did just buy House of Wax because it was on sale- still can't believe I did that ( ... )

mmarinov April 20 2006, 16:38:06 UTC

Man, the lj ate up my reply! *kicks ita virtual ass*

And man, now I'm itching to read the pics even more! *takes a calming breath*

I hear Devour is pretty bad - Not Jensen, of course, but his character doesnt hold any of the guy's usual charm or smarm. I also heard, don't know if it's true or not, that there's a sawing-through-tongue scene and I have consequently sworn never to watch it. I do really do horror :P

Thread 6

pixel_0 April 20 2006, 16:42:32 UTC

Second to last chapter? Ack! Why is everybody's fics ending all of a sudden? Now I want to hold onto my last chapter forever and ever because I'm getting protective-mother syndrome with it and refuse to let it leave. *clears throat* Right. Erm. So, I get a bit too attached to my fics. Moving on...

You do Sam and Dean interactions so well it's not quite fair. The whole scene in the hospital, for example. You have the right amount of snark combined with Sam's need for emotional moments. It's not overly done snark (i.e. constant "Jerk." "Bitch." moments) and the emotional moments are good enough that Sam gets his chick-flick talks before Dean pushes it away and pretends not to care. (Even though we all know he does!)

I've got to admit that you've got a real ear for dialogue in general, as I went back and quickly reread the Sam with the two girls part. I like how you write things as people say them. Like this part: “Ew, no, she’s a freak.” The girl’s eyes widened. “I mean, you know, I feel totally bad for her and her family for their, ( ... )

mmarinov April 20 2006, 17:03:51 UTC

I had to fight back laughing on this part--because I really, really wanted to--only because I'm in the "quiet section" of the library. So, by fighting back the giggles, I think I must've sounded like I was choking on something, and the guy behind me probably thought I was dying.

I had to fight back laughing at *that* part, lol! Aw man, that's too funny :D

So is your chapter up to its last too? :o Oh man, you're right, every story is ending! Though you have another one planned, right (right?) I have a couple. Uni starts back on Monday but that didn't stop me before! lol

Yeah, I always try to write my fics with them as episodes in mind...if that makes sense? So that if I can't picture them saying/doing it on screen, then it gets chopped out of my fic. But don't sell yourself short - you're awesome at the brotherly interaction also!

Like this part: “Ew, no, she’s a freak.” The girl’s eyes widened. “I mean, you know, I feel totally bad for her and her family for their, you know, loss and all, but no, she’s not really one of us, ( ... )

pixel_0 April 20 2006, 17:14:29 UTC

So is your chapter up to its last too? :o Oh man, you're right, every story is ending! Though you have another one planned, right (right?) I have a couple. Uni starts back on Monday but that didn't stop me before!

Yeah, I'm on the last chapter. I was going to post it last night, but I had tons of unexpected homework to take care of. It's been beta'ed and everything, but I keep looking at it going, "Aw...I'm gonna miss you..."

Sadly, I don't have anything planned. I've been throwing around ideas, but nothing seems to be...good. They all end up turning into some weird cracked out ideas or just don't work when I try to plan them out. Argh. Frustration results.

So that if I can't picture them saying/doing it on screen, then it gets chopped out of my fic. But don't sell yourself short - you're awesome at the brotherly interaction also!

lol. Thanks. My sister goes, "You're good at two things: Angst and death." I had to laugh at that.

Heh, yeah, you can't have spent 6 years in an all-girls highschool and the next three years after that ( ... )

adelheide April 20 2006, 17:05:32 UTC

I am soooo looking forward to Meg getting her ass well and truly kicked.

So much. The wait is killing me.

mmarinov April 20 2006, 17:10:20 UTC

Lol, I wasn't going to put a strong emphasis on MegAssKicking, but it's what people seem to want! So I may just have to re-plan this last chap ;)

But for now, it's 3 in the morning, I'm off to bed. The last chap should be done by tomorrow night.