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mmarinov

Lessons 5/10

Jul 04, 2006 12:58

I'm pretty happy with this chapter - it's the first time in a long time that a chapter has just flowed with barely any resistance. And I assure you there will be much angst and hurt still to come in this story ;) Now I must skedattle off to a SPN marathon! We're seeing how many nights it takes to get through the whole season, lol.

Title: Lessons 5/ ( Read more... )

fanfic, supernatural, lessons

Comments 53

wynter_rebel July 4 2006, 16:24:05 UTC

YES! :-D You know, those two drunk guys are a lot like me and my buddies when we get drunk, hehehe.

Great chapter! I'm really enjoying this story. :-D

mmarinov July 5 2006, 07:23:00 UTC

Yay, thank you! Glad you're enjoying it! I had to add the drunk college boys...I had to! Lol, what's college without them? ;)

You know, those two drunk guys are a lot like me and my buddies when we get drunk, hehehe.
The screaming in each other's faces, too? =D I always find that particular act very amusing!

wynter_rebel July 5 2006, 15:47:44 UTC

Hehe, more like the tripping over each other, hanging onto each other, and basically just acting like idiots, hehe. :-D

And seriously, college wouldn't be college without the drunks.

katbcoll July 4 2006, 17:20:44 UTC

Ohhhh shiiiit! Well, I'm not surprised that it's the threat to Sam's life that sets Dean off. That's just Dean being, well Dean.
“Are we being punk’d?”
*cracks up*

“Banana banana bo bana be bi bo banana Ghost Girl banana bo bana…”
*howls* I gotta say that I totally agree with Dean's reaction.

“You look like shit. Menopausal shit.”
*snerks* Um, ew. *laughs*

Wow, great combo between twisting the plot, funny and freak-ass serious!

mmarinov July 5 2006, 07:26:27 UTC

Thanks! =D Yeah, I figured it'd have to be a direct threat to Sam, rather than him, to get Dean really worked up about this case. The guy has a complex of some sort :P

writeatmidnight July 5 2006, 03:49:45 UTC

This is so good that I feel like I'm watching an episode. What I can't believe is that I'm actually drawn in by the mystery part of the whole thing. That normally never happens with SPN fanfic! But now I've got to know what the heck is going on here!

And this?

“What’d she say? ‘Coz my conversation with her basically went: snark snark, muaha muaha.”

“Didn’t let her get a word in, huh?”

I laughed way too hard at that.

mmarinov July 5 2006, 07:33:17 UTC

What I can't believe is that I'm actually drawn in by the mystery part of the whole thing. That normally never happens with SPN fanfic!

Wow, I'm flattered! I'm such a huge fan of Dean angst and whumpage, that I feel compelled to construct an elaborate plot to excuse it all, lol, so my stories don't turn into angst-without-plot. Really happy to hear you're enjoying the mystery side =D A lot more is going to be revealed in the next chap.

Thanks for commenting!

choasangel July 5 2006, 15:28:34 UTC

Read this over at ff.net yesterday. Very awesome. Loved Sam's hiding place...loved that she knew he was there even more. But oh is she up to no good. Keep wondering what she knows Dean did and why he has to pay for it or at least why she won't let him get away with it. This just gets more and more intriguing. Not good that they found pictures of themseleves in a box. Think that they've only solved half of this double sided puzzle....can't wait until they figure out the other half. Dean's line on how his conversation with her went was just hilarious....cuz yep that's pretty much how it went. ;D LOVE IT!!

Did you know that you call Susie Sherri in the part between her and Sam at the beginning?

Love ya dushi....later

mmarinov July 6 2006, 03:34:03 UTC

Woops! I'll go fix that lil name mix up. Thank you for that! You're like my unofficial beta ;)
More will be revealed in the next chap =D

choasangel July 6 2006, 03:40:11 UTC

Any time, dushi ;)

Does more secrets revealed equal more questions being asked? I just love trying to figure your fics out. Just like with Wynter's I usually get thrown in the opposite direction at the end....Kinda like Dean in college ;)

iamstealthyone July 5 2006, 16:29:41 UTC

Ooh, food for thought in this chapter … more and more being revealed about psycho!Susie. Interesting.

Favorite lines:

“Sam,” she called again, smile widening. “If you’re waiting for me to fall asleep, I should probably let you know, I rarely do.”

That was a creepy little line (in a good way, of course). *g*

“They were already dead.”

Sam stopped, slowly turning back.

“They just didn’t know it yet. I did, though. Cam was going to get hit by a car on Graduation Night. Claire was going to overdose on Crystal Meth three years later in an attempt to stay thin. Sherrie was going to die old, in her bed, surrounded by fat grandkids.”

Oh dear. That doesn’t bode well for Dean, does it?

“You looked at me and they just sort of… popped out and into you.” She pouted in mock sympathy. “Better ask your brother what kind of casket he wants.”

*bitch slaps Susie*

“Me and Dean? A lot of things have tried to kill us, but we’re still here. Somehow, I doubt you’re the one to end it. And I know I’m not going to be.”

I love Sam’s steely ( ... )

mmarinov July 6 2006, 03:37:19 UTC

Yipes! Thanks for pointing that put! I'll fix it immediately. A few stories back, I called Dean 'Sam' once or twice, lol. Again, thank you for taking the time to give some detailed comments =D

mmarinov July 6 2006, 05:42:00 UTC

*such