Lessons: 3/?

[mmarinov]

Third chapter has arrived. I wanted to do a lot more with this chapter but it just stretched on for too long so I had to end it at 5000 words and resign myself to the fact that this story is going to have a hell of a lot more chapters than anticipated, lol. This chapter is more an 'in-between' so I promise more plot revelations (and college

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[mellaithwen]

countdown: uh oh

evil creepy, weirdo emo ghost being mean...and stalkerish :O

love the banter, and yes dean, this is one of those hunts where you get the shit knocked out of you. I suggest reading Haunted if you have any doubts in the matter

meant to ask you: are you gonna try and redeem your pompoms by avoiding spoilers? :D

[mmarinov]

Oooh, I meant to reply to your post about that but LJ was being difficult at the time. I read them!! Lol. I didn't even give myself a chance to resist - I saw 'S2 spoilers', clicked it and read it before my mind could even process what was happening. Looks like you'll be keeping my pompoms for awhile :(

[mellaithwen]

god damn it dude

the pompoms miss you :(

were the spoilers good/bad/worth it? but dont say the actual spoiler

[mmarinov]

Well, their validity is actually being questioned (they were very vague to begin with - nothing really specific), but if they're real, you and I both will be happy chappies =D

[wynter_rebel]

BWAH!!! So good. :-D The numbers sort of freak me out because of the amount of zeros, lol. And poor Dean. Guy's got a head of steel, hehe.

Awesome job! It made my day to see a chapter from you. :-D

[mmarinov]

Lol, number sequences are scary, arent they?? We can all thank LOST for this =D
So glad you enjoyed!! I was a bit iffy about this chap because it was meant to involve so much more, but Dean's damn head of steel ended up eating 5000 words so I had to stop or risk it getting too big to fit into an LJ entry, lol.

[adelheide]

Okay, here's the thing. I talk to my TV. It's a bad habit, I know. The little people in the magic box can't hear me and won't do what I tell them. But when I get really caught up in something, I talk to the TV.

And sometimes, I talk to fic. Like at the beginning of this when I kept muttering, "Get up, Sam. Go to the room. Now! Move it!" Because, you know, Dean was getting the snot beaten out of him while Sammy slept.

I am all antsy, giddy, and anxious for the next chapter. *shudder* Creepy little...whatever she is.

[mmarinov]

Lol! Is it wrong to find your comments as entertaining as the fanfic stories themselves? =D

I'm dedicating today to writing chapter four, I think. College encounters await! (Muah! funness)

[apieceofcake]

YAY! Another chapter :-) And I'm glad that this is going to be longer than you first thought *g*

[mmarinov]

Hehe, thank you :) It's got *quite* a bit of plot and twists and red herrings to get through - which kinda sucks because it's going to eat up into most of my holidays, I think, lol, damn those good looking boys and their ghost-hunting ways.

[pheebs1]

You know I love your Dean dialogue (his reaction that Sam wasn't a hot blonde was priceless) but Sam can be snarky too, and I loved this:

“I scared away the floating, glowing, controls with the power of her mind ghost?”. Snort. Dean deserved that.

This is more and more intriguing. I look forward to the next bit! I am so crap at mystery/case things, I really like it when people write a good one that's keeping me interested, and where Dean/Sam are being, well, Dean/Sam too. So - yay you!

[mmarinov]

Hehe, yeah Sam has a snarky streak when he wants it there - gotta love the guy.

And thank you!! Well, I envy you people who can pack in an amazing amount of poiganant character exploration into oneshots, the mystery thing is easier for me - I rely on plot to distract readers from the fact that I'm not all too great at developing our boys, lol.