WWII, PG, The Middleman Fanfiction

Dec 19, 2008 02:16

Fandom/Pairing: The Middleman; MM/WW ( Read more... )

fic, author:nonky, rating:pg

Leave a comment

Comments 4

Brain control! the_blue_fenix December 19 2008, 16:32:54 UTC
All babies have mind control via their uber-cuteness. That's how they survive until Mommy gets to sleep through the night. A WWII (and I'm embarrassed how long I was reading the title as World War II) would be getting heavy cute from both sides. Heck, all she would need is the Sudden Grin of Utter Delight. That hits me like a board in the back of the head every time I see it, and I don't even care which character he's playing. (Comedies are better for that.)

Reply


matchlightfire December 19 2008, 19:09:30 UTC
Only you can pull off snarky and sweet MMWWbaby!fic - in other words, this is perfect and I love you for it:)

Reply


The Middlebaby would be pretty cute. brista December 20 2008, 02:51:52 UTC
The Middleman had welled up in the eyes over his daughter's illegitimacy and she'd never brought it up again.

Awwwww. He would be really upset about that. I pretty much awww'd through this whole thing and I don't even like babies. You know that thing's gonna end up accidentally getting superpowers and make a whole lot of supermesses for Mom, Dad, and Auntie Ida to clean up.

Reply


skauble January 5 2009, 01:57:19 UTC
I admit it. I went for the baby fic first. But what else could I do? I’m helpless in the face of sockies!

Btw - SOCKIES!!!

A soft starfish of a hand waved toward the screen as Bob announced the winning guess. The contestant ran up to hug Bob, and teeny Dubbie slumped in tiredness. Ida scooted her around to lie across her arms, and rocked her unconsciously as she watched the putting challenge. Yellow socks wiggled on her elbow, and a steady stream of babbling rose as the girl got comfortable. Small fingers waved and Ida let her hold her fingers. Wendy held her thumb and yawned explosively.

I love this for the obvious reason - the inclusion of sockies. But I also loved the way you described her hand as a soft starfish. It was such a tender and touching way to create a picture of the little one. You make me want to have babies. Are you trying to get me thrown out of HB?

Also -

“I know. Who bids one dollar? It's a snaky, cowardly move,” she agreed. “What you have to do is watch the eyes. You see Bob? He's always smiling, but ( ... )

Reply


Leave a comment

Up