Comments | mlsky: BSG Fic: Vision - Epsilon Sentence Ficlet, L/K, AU, M (12 Days of Fic Marathon)

mlsky

BSG Fic: Vision - Epsilon Sentence Ficlet, L/K, AU, M (12 Days of Fic Marathon)

Dec 22, 2008 21:39

Title: Vision - Epsilon Sentence Ficlet

Author: Monti

Date: December 13, 2008

Rating: R

Word Count: 603

Category: L/K AU

Warnings: None

Spoilers: None past anything aired

Disclaimers: Don't own these people. Just borrowing them for a little while. I promise to put them back when I'm finished.

Author's note: Day nine of the 12 Days of Fic. Slaving beta ( Read more... )

bsg, 12 days, battlestar galactica, singularities, fanfic

Comments 11

cherylad December 23 2008, 04:11:38 UTC

Simply powerful and moving.

mlsky January 3 2009, 22:49:18 UTC

Oh, thank you. I was quite pleased with how this one turned out. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

anastashial December 23 2008, 04:39:26 UTC

Oh I like that, he had resigned and reconciled himself to dying and when he didn't was just so in the wrong place and totally lost. Who would know how to deal with that?

mlsky January 4 2009, 00:25:43 UTC

Thank you. I kind of wish it had played out with more moments on screen, but I loved what we got.

As always, thanks for reading. :)

ptbvisiongrrl December 24 2008, 23:59:49 UTC

Very well written- poor Lee.

mlsky January 4 2009, 00:54:41 UTC

Thank you. :)

smact46 December 26 2008, 06:12:53 UTC

sorry I haven't been commenting sooner....I have been insanely busy getting my stuff ready to submit to the board - but I have been loving what you have been posting, read them all. You write Lee really well.

mlsky January 4 2009, 00:56:23 UTC

Oh wow...thank you. It makes my day to read that.

Thanks for reading and I hope things slow down for you!

thrace_adams January 1 2009, 01:28:24 UTC

Oh that was really good. I think that really captured exactly what he was feeling in that scene. The hubs and I have had numerous discussions about this scene and Black Market and this was definitely Lee having a moral "come to Jesus" moment. Very well written as always!

mlsky January 4 2009, 01:14:11 UTC

Seriously...thank you. I was very happy with how this one turned out but your comments truly let me know I got how Lee was feeling across.

I'm one of the few who sorta got Black Market. The execution was poor, but there's a lot there for a fan of Lee to sink their teeth into...and not walk away all pissy about it. (No offense intended if you hate that episode)

As always, thank you so much for reading and commenting. I truly appreciate it!

thrace_adams January 4 2009, 01:47:52 UTC

You are very welcome. I have to admit it's not one of my favorite episodes - only because of the whole prostitute thing - it's so obvious he's trying to replace what he's lost. The hubs and I have had many conversations about him shooting Phalen (I'm all for it - hubs was very disappointed in that plot point - he thought it tarnished the character quite a bit).

I got Black Market - (part of the reason I really liked your story LOL) it's just not one of my favorites and to be frank looking back at Black Market and then lengths he went to for Shevon and Paya makes me question why he didn't even try to find Kara after New Caprica (have to admit I always wanted to see a bit of Kara/Lee/Kacey).

And again, you are so welcome! Your writing is always brilliant!