[update] more thoughtful now than anything else;

[mlina]

VIII
Ghazal of Dark Death

I want to sleep the sleep of apples

Comments

[coffeebased]

Aw shit, this is my favorite of your poems. Hands down. The birds part reminds me of George in the Doll House a bit but the whole poem is beautiful.

[mlina]

Oh Hope. You're right.

Brb. Crying now.

[coffeebased]

What! Don't cry! Unless you are crying of happiness about writing a frigging awesome poem!

*cuddles the spiny thing*

[mlina]

Nah. It's. The subject matter. Ffffff. Subject matter making me cry.

*thing is cuddled*

Will not touch it now. Done editing.

[pawdough]

beautiful. your poem is.

[mlina]

thank you, pau ♥

[mlina]

i'm always so speechless when you tell me that it's beautiful. i'm so afraid that my pretty words might not sound honest, but i try. i really try. ♥