I really, truly do love the way you portray Yukimura: he's all-male, not completely girly in any way. The fourth journal entry really sounds like him in trouble - though I have to wonder why he got grounded...
*grins*
He sounds different, and yet the same, from the way that you write him in tokyo_below. Not that that's a bad thing; it's great that you can distinguish one Yuki from the other, instead of writing them the exact same way
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I really, truly do love the way you portray Yukimura: he's all-male, not completely girly in any way. The fourth journal entry really sounds like him in trouble - though I have to wonder why he got grounded...
*grins*
He sounds different, and yet the same, from the way that you write him in tokyo_below. Not that that's a bad thing; it's great that you can distinguish one Yuki from the other, instead of writing them the exact same way ( ... )
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