Since You Are Here

Apr 19, 2010 23:07

Title: Since You Are Here
Author: Ria / ufp13
Pairing: A/R
Rating: NC-17

Since you are here )

adama/roslin, author: ufp13, rating: nc-17, mlh: holiday

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icedteainthebag April 21 2010, 17:36:24 UTC
I like this... this is so her, and them.

Sometimes, she liked to distract, to entertain him during long, boring meetings by wearing her shirt just so that it displayed a nice amount of cleavage while still being decent enough. The way his gaze travelled over her body, eventually resting on her chest made her feel powerful in an entirely different way, in a better way than the Quorum ever could.

And this is such a loving act, so completely innocent at the time, and so wonderfully described... it's what true love is.

Her legs, her feet, her arms, her buttocks - he wanted to touch her everywhere, wanted to treat every part of her to some tender care, a care she deserved but hardly ever received.

This is a really gorgeous image. Probably my favorite part of the story.

Panting hard, she slowly slid down to lie on his similarly heaving chest, but not without taking in the sight of him lost in his pleasure. A rare view, the stoic admiral utterly relaxed, the rest of the cosmos forgotten for a few precious minutes. It touched her ( ... )

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ufp13 May 5 2010, 04:14:44 UTC
Wow! Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm relieved that after all the time of not writing them, I didn't mess up.

Yeah, he had to say it. Couldn't stop him. *lol* I'm usually not a big fan of declarations of love, but it somehow felt right...

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missbevcrusher April 30 2010, 00:53:18 UTC
Lovely and HOT! :D ♥

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ufp13 May 5 2010, 04:06:00 UTC
Thank you, hon. *hugs*

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theastolat May 4 2010, 10:22:07 UTC
She of all people should know how precious time was, and yet, she lived from day to day by a schedule she didn’t control while thinking ahead for others, for everybody but herself.

This is what I connected to most about this fic. This exploration of Laura and the ways she is going to interact with the world, how she is going to manipulate it, in small ways, just to have a sense of living.

And lots of hot sexins. Yes indeedy.

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ufp13 May 5 2010, 04:10:35 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad to hear I managed to give the fic some depth (no pun intended). :)

:D Somehow I can't seem to manage to write stories without secksing... :-S

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