DEFIANT EYES, ANGRY MOUTH: 11. Metamorphosis PART B

[mjaku]

He was actually very surprised to see Donghae lounging on one of the sofas there, Eunhyuk’s head resting on his lap. Sungmin immediately felt how some of his exhaustion lifted when seeing his best friend and let a smile spread to his lips. Eunhyuk rose up from his place on the sofa and Sungmin was forcibly pushed aside as both of the wolves phased

Comments

[cassy7lee]

Sungmin progress from his denial state ~~~
Dream....strange (?) or wet (?) dream....
I'm kinda sure that Kyuhyun can be Hankyung's rival a moment later. You give the sign of that .ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
I'll comment again later for every part. Need to sleep now...it's already 3.30 pm here. :D

[cassy7lee]

Here is for the part B

[mjaku]

Sungmin does think sex as one of his guardian tasks, and when he fought with Hankyung, he admitted that he isn't completely repulsed by the idea and will have sex with Hankyung if it's necessary. However, even if he accepts it as an idea, it doesn't mean that he's ready to change his sexuality completely for him. Get it? And when Sungmin asked Donghae about how to overcome his fear, he wants to get over it because it's hindering the normal tasks he has to perform with Hankyung. He thinks it's not possible for him to become a good guardian if he can't touch Hankyung normally and that's why he asked help from Donghae

[cassy7lee]

Aaahhh....I get it.thx for answering ^^
I'll re-read again later :D

[funnyjunkie]

HELL YEAH! a new chapter! so soon! wow
and very very hot!!! love the dream! I liked how he was first committing to Hankyung but then still backing away, only to give into hankyung in the end! love the lemons! very hothothothot!
more more more more of that! I hope Sungmin and hankyung will become even closer after this.
also that talk between donghea and sungmin was very well done, funny how sungmin still denies everything only to have a dream like that later :P
Can't wait for the next chappie! thank you so much for this quick update and looong chapter!

[mjaku]

ahhahah Somehow my favorite part of this chapter was the dream...I wonder why. I had so much fun writing Sungmin's panicked musings about the quilty pleasure ; ))He just doesn't know himself that well.

Sungmin and Donghae's dialogue was so much fun to write. First time in ages I enjoyed writing a conversation like that :DD

[babysuju]

my inner mind feel guilty of wanting more from tis longggggg chapter...I like how Ming is denying his crush over Hankyung n i really love that the two of them were constantly around each other n has the initiative to actually take the step in their guardianship ordeal...
Ming n Hae bickering is cute, its seems tat Hae is more matured thn Ming now n how he tried to knock some sense on Ming stupid head is juz funny...
I thing Hankyung know the inner battle in Ming but play innocence since he knew Ming well now n know that its not good to push Ming but just wait...
'the dream' its intrigue me, everything in it seems so surreal what more with Kyuhyunnie sudden appearances...I try to maybe get d outer meaning of it but I just can't...
thanksss for the update n pliz write more...kekeke...

[mjaku]

hahah, i'd have to write you a damn novel for a chapter if it would be longer than this, for god's sake XD

hahah i also like how donghae's character has molded itself into this. The original plan for donghae was completely different but this goes also quite well : DD

heheh the meaning of the dream will come out someday ; )))

[followurdestiny]

Ahh loved this chapter and its length... more characters are going to be involved? Kangin is again really subtle, good that Leeteuk is there to keep him in check XD haha I liked their interaction with Sungmin... also the blossoming Kyuhyun and Sungmin friendship - bickering - is amusing...
Zhoumi/Siwon! XD... and Finally Sungmin and Hangeng seem to get a long, now one hurdle has been won, but there is many to come I guess... and Sungmin having a wet dream about Hangeng XD... well eventually he will not able to deny that he does feel attraction, but I wonder when or how he will give into the attraction? XD... Looking forward to more!!! Fighting!

[mjaku]

If i know the character i have given to Sungmin at all, most likely he has to be banged in the head with the knowledge that he has feelings for Hankyung, but we'll see what happens :DDDd

and a LOT MORE characters are going to be involved, i guarantee that!!

[sira8924]

this dream was so hot!but i think that hangeng knows about it and maybe even influenced it! he even smells his fear how cannot smell it?!mmmmmmmmmm. when this story is finished you could write a spin off of eunhae! that would be interesting!

[mjaku]

ohoho I'm glad you liked the basket of lemons~~

But remember that when Sungmin met Kyuhyun the first time, this small piece of information was given: The wolves cannot affect the dreams directly. they can only give the general direction, if it's a wet dream, or a nightmare or something else : ) Of course hankyung MIGHT have given the idea that it's a wet dream but he can't affect the characters in it. If you remember from the very beginning when Sungmin had his first dream, the person...uhhh...groping him didn't have a face. Only later on it got the face of hankyung.

I was thinking about that spinoff too, but then again, it would probably extend to eternities like this one XD

[sira8924]

thank you for the explanation :) I'm waiting for chap 12! and about a long spinoff....I wouldn't complain:) Fighting!

[mjaku]

hahahah, i actually had to check the old rules i had written for that :DD LoL it's good that opeple ask about the old stuff because then i have to read the previous chapters again :_D