DEFIANT EYES, ANGRY MOUTH: 4. Two sides of the same page PART A

[mjaku]

Title: Defiant eyes, Angry Mouth
Author: mjaku
Beta: none
Genre: Supernatural, romance, friendship, !FUTURE!Smut, lemonade....
Rating: PG-13 (Blood, mentions of violence....)
Pairings: HanMin (HankyungxSungmin) Eunhae
Disclaimer: I do not own Super Junior or any other band mentioned in this fic.

Summary: Sungmin loved the forest more than anything in the

Comments

[naomibe]

I don't have enough time now ;~; but I really appreciate this new chapter, I'll comment tomorrow !
I'm so happy that you're back <3

[mjaku]

It's okay, I update the second part after the weekend anyway, so you can comment on that :D

Haha, i guess I was gone because of personal stuff (gonna go answer your comment on one of my rants <3<3<3 hehehe I'm so happy that my readers actually care about my personal shit!!! XD)

[naomibe]

Actually, I'm commenting now ^^. I'll post my comment soon, I just want to take my time to reread all the chapter and to say all the things I want to say.
<3

[naomibe]

First of all… I’m so happy to see you again <3. I wondered how you were recently. I’m glad that you had so much fun with your friend ^^. I just hope that it’s not too hard with your family now… *hug you*

So… I’ll begin with the title. “Two sides of the same page”. It can mean so many things… Sungmin seems strong outwardly, but he has weaknesses inside of him. Hankyung is “half human half wolf”. Sungmin and Hankyung are the two part of the same bond.

“he felt like he was teetering on an edge of a cliff, not knowing whether he would fall one centimeter or one kilometer.”
Nice way to say that he doesn’t know how his future will be.

“his mind conjured up the image of Hankyung’s freaky bacteria actually running along his skin fighting against Sungmin’s bacteria, slowly getting the upper hand as Sungmin’s bacteria were getting panicked as the miniature Hankyung’s were devouring everything.”
I absolutely love the way you depict what is happening in Sungmin’s body. These little bacteria seems so cute fighting against each other <3. (yeah,

[vlmasj825]

AD;SKFJA;LDKFJAHDJSAF
you can't imagine how i was spazzing when i saw your update xD

THE SUSPENSE THE SUSPENSE /dying
and the part about donghae. pure win. seriously.

THE LAST SENTENCE. ;____;
i find it so cute <3

[mjaku]

updating the next part after weekend~~~~~~ sorry this took so long ^^"

[sung_gi]

...
I was supposed to read about RENESANSSI and then I just somehow found myself reading this...! XD
I LOVE IT!
I LOVE HANGENG'S CHARACTER! I LOVE SUNGMIN BEING AN ASS TO HIM! AND I LOVE THE SCENE WHERE DONGHAE AND EUNHYUK FOUGHT AND...!
...and now I have to really start doing my homework...
Oh, this was my first comment on this fic *TROLOLOLOLOLOL*
Now I've done that...
...I'll read the other part later... :b when I have enough time to do that :b

[mjaku]

Lol I'm glad to know that you actually got over ur immense hate for this XDXD

But yeah, I decided to convey both of them a bit differently kukuku~~

[bonchan24]

I am so touched by caring sungmin. It's surprise me that Sungmin considers Hankyung is cute in wolf forms^^. Again, I really like the bickering between them. The highlight part :
“Hey dog?”
“I’m a wolf, you sack of meat.”
Hahahaha... I wonder how it sound from hankyung in chinese accent.