Comments | mizzougirl88: Black: A Meredith centered one shot

mizzougirl88

Black: A Meredith centered one shot

Jan 18, 2010 14:39

Black is all she can see around her.

It’s the color of the night sky. It’s the color of her dress. It’s the color of her strappy sandals. And it’s the color of his tux.

His tux.

It is the only color that she can see right now.

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She knew that there was no turning back once he chased her into that exam room. She begged and pleaded with him...
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grey's anatomy, meredith, one shot

Comments 12

seattle_dreams January 18 2010, 22:15:34 UTC

I love this, Amber! (Even though you already know that. Haha.) Seriously, it makes me want to go back and watch the season two finale. I love how you worked in everything, even Denny dying.

I especially loved this part:

Black is all she can see around her.

It’s the color of the night sky. It’s the color of her dress. It’s the color of her strappy sandals. And it’s the color of his tux.

His tux.

It is the only color that she can see right now.

Write more! :P

mizzougirl88 January 18 2010, 23:18:59 UTC

Thanks, Missy! :D

I was hoping to tie everything in. It was a little difficult, but I was glad I could do it. :)

I hope to write more, but school gets in the way... :/

inzaghina January 19 2010, 13:38:24 UTC

I really love this.
You expressed her emotions through the use of the colour black in a wonderful way.
Your writing skills amaze me.
Thanks for sharing.

mizzougirl88 January 19 2010, 17:05:59 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

merder4ever82 January 19 2010, 16:53:49 UTC

I loved it, Amber! It's so intense.
I love everything about season two. :)

mizzougirl88 January 19 2010, 17:06:26 UTC

Thanks, Rose! :D

I love s2 too. :)

uniquegrl7 January 19 2010, 22:02:47 UTC

"He was the Prince Charming in those fairy tale stories that her mother never read to her, but she heard all the other little girls talking about on the playground in elementary school. They said that the fairy tale was what you would get later on in life, but of course she didn’t believe them. She went on throughout life without even taking a second glance at men she met, but for some reason she took a second glance at Derek."

This was wonderful.

mizzougirl88 January 19 2010, 22:36:03 UTC

Thanks so much! :D

I just friended you back. :)

limonatafic January 20 2010, 00:23:40 UTC

This was so... well, I want to say great, but it's broken S2 Mer and so 'great' is kinda not the right word. :P But it was. :)

I think this is my favorite part:

She loves him.

It never really was a surprise.

mizzougirl88 January 20 2010, 00:29:10 UTC

Thanks so much, Leah! :D

Broken Mer in s2 was so sad. :'( I'm so glad that she has her happy ending now. :)