Fic: Between the Blue Lines (Center Ice)

[mizvickers]

Title: Between the Blue Lines (Center Ice) - Part 2/2
Author: Vicki
Rating: R-ish (but probably not. I fail at the rating system)
Pairings: Kurt/Karofsky
Genre: Romance
Spoilers: Season 2. (The usual suspects of 2.06 through 2.08)
Disclaimer: I clearly do not own anything within...props to Ryan Murphy and such.
Word Count: 7,600ish (14,800ish in total(

Comments

[herbailiwick]

This fic was very interesting and very well-written. Really enjoyed how I felt like I was actually at the Olympics. Also, it was just plain cute.

[mizvickers]

I strive for cuteness :) Thanks for reading!

[spite_pet]

I've been checking for an update for this an unhealthy amount of times. And now I'm just so happy. This story has been all kinds of epic, I've loved every word. ^___^

[mizvickers]

Yeah, I feel really bad this wasn't posted last night but it was just not to be. Hopefully it was worth the wait!

[kirke_novak]

So much concentrated awesome! It's almost too much :D
The progress of their relationship was such a great thing to read, the fact they were both attracted but waiting for the other one. Loved that Dave asked Kurt to ask him.
Dave patents were something, weren't they, especially the mum.

The ending was fantastic, fluffy but not unrealistic (I kind of suspected they'd get silver). Hope you write more for this ship.

[mizvickers]

I really liked playing with the fact that Dave was just nervous in general to do anything when it came to Kurt. As fluffy as this was I wanted at least a little issue :)
I fully admit to pretty much stealing my friend's mother and naming her Mrs. Karofsky.

I'm Canadian...I couldn't write the American's winning gold over us...even if David Karofsky is on the team ;)
I fully expect to write another piece or so in this verse. And I know I have a few other ideas for the boys...it's just about finding the time.
Thanks so much for reading! Glad you enjoyed it.

[carolina_hope]

so so wonderful. his mom is a piece of work but I do like his dad. and Emerson :)

one of our players said that to him bronze sort of means more then silver because it means they won. but I like silver good enough ;) and his reaction to it, the initial one as well as later is just so ... sweet?

and I love that it took years for someone to live up to that kiss for Kurt, as unwelcomed as it may have been. and that he was waiting for Dave to make a move while Dave tried to keep his distance

I basically just loved it all :)

[mizvickers]

Yeah, it's always bizarre watching the interviews after a gold/silver matchup because there's just so much angst over loosing. "But you guys won silver! You got second place! Yay!"

I'm totally obsessed with the Kurtofsky kiss (as I'm sure everyone else in our shipdom is) and all the various meanings it could/does take on.

Thanks for reading and the loverly review!

[wine_carnation]

I love this so bad! I love your Dave! He's both older and calm and collected but at the same time gets reduced to a gibbering mass when he finds Kurt. I loved your take on Dave's thoughts, it was just pure awesome :D

[mizvickers]

I was sorely tempted to dub this an 'AU' as getting into Dave's head and worrying about it being IC had me fretting.
I luff gibbering masses, mwah.
I'm very, very glad you enjoyed this...and that Dave wasn't a cop-out failure.