Consummation - OUTTAKE: Second Honeymoon

[mizra]

So, you guise know I'm not a smut writer. Never could get the knack of Insert Peg A into Slot B stuff. But I can write something not-so PG-13. Try PG-16. Too much for the 13 crowd, but not quite enough to deem it R. AKA, Victorian Steam. XD

Story: Consummation
Chapter: OUTTAKE: Second Honeymoon
Summary: EPOV during the scene where Edward shows Bella

Comments

[xtalleenx]

i left you an essay-ish review on ff.net, i believe i was the first one :D

i keep wanting to do a oneshot about this moment (i did for the 2 other fade-to-blacks) but since this one is supposed to be more... well just more (vampire sex and all that lol) i dunno how to handle it. hopefully when i get there, it'll be as good as this one!

[mizra]

Aw, thanks honey!

I think the more one-shots, the better. And, personally (as you know) I feel like you can be incredibly sexy without using direct terms. The imagination can create a lovely, arousing picture given the right state of mind.

I say go for it, bb!

[xtalleenx]

oh, i believe i will, eventually. i wanted to make a trilogy out of these 3 scenes so i'll probably write that little monster at some point.

[mizra]

YAY! *does a happy dance*

[mizra]

Exactly! I love inside jokes. Or cheesy jokes. Or just jokes in general. And Edward rarely makes them.

I wonder who would write a fanfic about Edward being a stand-up comedian? It would filarious! (effin' hilarious.)

And, BTW, thank you. ;)