Magic & Manners: Chapter Two

[mizkit]

With further apologies to Jane Austen, I present to you the second chapter of MAGIC & MANNERS, which is what happens when I get it into my head to wonder what PRIDE & PREJUDICE would be like if it was not a lack of wealth that beleaguered the Bennet sisters, but rather an excess of magic…

Chapter One is here or here, if you want to read it on LJ.

Comments

[mbernardi]

You keep posting chapters on Pixel-Stained Technopeasant Wretch Day then you should finish it by the time you turn a hundred!

Well done, I'd certainly fund a kickstarter for this.

[mizkit]

*laughs* That's about the speed I'm working on it, yeah. :) Thanks!

[la_marquise_de_]

:-)
I do love this.

[mizkit]

<3 :)

[tersa]

Mental note to read this and the previous chapter, because...well, you may have seen my review of a similar book yesterday, and I'm hoping yours displeases me less. :)

[mizkit]

I specifically didn't read that review, actually. :)

[tersa]

I can understand why, and now I'll just have to read yours so I can compare the two and let you know what I think in non-spoilery terms! :)

[mizkit]

*waits nervously* :)

[chrysoula]

Still works for me.

You even managed to work in a reference to fine eyes without annoying me, which let me tell you is a FEAT. xxxx

[mizkit]

*falls over in relief*

Srsly, you're like my total test target audience here, and also I went BACK and FORTH on that fine eyes thing and I'm so glad you, in particular, think it worked! <3