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2013 Birthday Prompt #4 - dS for Omens

Jan 08, 2013 14:37

Welcome to Day Four, and a due South entry for the most excellent

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ride_4ever January 9 2013, 01:21:27 UTC

Wow, you and canon. Reads like a missing scene fulfillment...totally belongs .

Spot-on character moment : "Ray looked at her and then pointedly at the nice suit pants he was wearing."

Killer final lines : "He

mizface January 9 2013, 03:10:22 UTC

Thank you! I think this was inspired (beyond the prompt) by my dSSS fic, and me being in that whole headspace of RayV/Stella.

Glad it felt spot-on, and I'm glad the last lines worked for you :)

desireearmfeldt January 9 2013, 03:07:33 UTC

Nice! -- you capture the Ray/Frannie sibling dynamic (in its more congenial aspect) well, and I like this premise & how you play it out.

mizface January 9 2013, 03:11:44 UTC

Thank you! I figure that Frannie and Ray would be nicer to each other (at least for awhile) once Ray is back. Or maybe they've both grown up enough while he was in Vegas to have a more mature relationship. In any case, glad you enjoyed it!