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Fic: The Fall of the World's Own Optimist

Feb 06, 2006 15:19

Fic: The Fall of the World's Own Optimist.
Author: mizBean
Pairings: Draco/OFC, Harry/Draco
Wordcount: 4,800
Rating: PG
Summary: A Death Eater's Lament, or the absurd, and sometimes sad, story of what really happened to Draco Malfoy.
A/N: Written for fourth_rose for her birthday. *sorry for the delay* And apologies to cutecoati for not finishing this in time for the ( Read more... )

character: harry potter, fic, fic: harry potter, character: draco malfoy, pairing: harry/draco

Comments 41

silver_osiris February 7 2006, 11:56:08 UTC

Very realistic and well done.

mizbean February 7 2006, 19:44:28 UTC

Thank you very much!! ♥

cutecoati February 7 2006, 13:28:30 UTC

*takes deep breath*

That was wonderful! Very inventive, the flashbacks blend perfectly into the flow. Draco's character development rings very true to me (as does Harry's which we learn through Draco's POV).

I also liked the tiny details you added to the atmosphere (e.g. Andromeda offering to pay for Draco's solicitor)

Dear, I'd forgive you anything! Hey! Come back with my shoes!

mizbean February 7 2006, 20:24:56 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. Yeah, I tried to imagine what Harry/Draco would be like if Draco really did become a Death Eater without going into the whole redeemed, fluffy nonsense.

Again, my apologies for not finishing it in time. I can't seem to hit any fic deadlines anymore.

Give you back your shoes? Never!!

graphix_fret February 7 2006, 16:46:43 UTC

mizbean February 7 2006, 20:27:30 UTC

Wow! Thank you for such a lovely review. I appreciate that you just started reading slash because this seems more like preslash to me.

And it needs an OFC, doesn't it? I mean, how else would he cope & what woman wouldn't jump at the chance?

Hee! So true!!

Thank you again. ♥

ura_hd February 7 2006, 17:43:46 UTC

nice

mizbean February 7 2006, 20:27:45 UTC

Thanks!

ninja_tech February 7 2006, 19:40:14 UTC

So I suppose that is a one shot? Very good, though I wouldn't mind it continuing into a more romantic arc. *practically keens for more* But--I don't want to be the rabid fangirl, so if this is all there is to this, then I am still very happy.

mizbean February 7 2006, 20:31:04 UTC

The quick answer is that I already have a lot of fic projects in the works, but I won't say that I won't continue this. I have some ideas where this may go. When I'd write it, I'm not so sure.

But thank you very much for your interest and reading and commenting:)