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Devotion [Byakuya/Renji, NC-17]

May 23, 2009 00:03

Title: Devotion
Author: mizBean
Rating: NC-17/Mature
Word count: 610
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: Byakuya/Renji
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Some rules were meant to be broken.
Notes: Written for

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fic, pairing: byakuyaxrenji, character: abarai renji, fic: bleach, 100-999 words, character: kuchiki byakuya, community: bleach_contest

Comments 22

taigrin May 23 2009, 14:07:27 UTC

So hot and teasing! I've love it! And the fundoshi too, LOL.

mizbean May 23 2009, 17:47:26 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

rare_fandom May 23 2009, 16:12:30 UTC

Really like this. Hot and humorous at the same time. I especially like the beginning, when Byakuya’s all “I am a Kuchiki. We are a proud family. We do not bend under any...aww, fuck that.”

mizbean May 23 2009, 17:49:20 UTC

Hee! Yes. I enjoyed being able to poke fun at Byakuya there:P Thank you for reading!

ldybastet May 23 2009, 16:38:29 UTC

Oooooooh! Yay! I really like this! :) *hugs* Thank you!!!!

Oh, your proud Byakuya is awesome! As is the mischievous Renji, of course. :) I love it that Renji is all obedient, but not, and yet still gives Byakuya exactly what he secretly wants. *g* He's seen through your mask, Taichou! LOL

And fundoshi! Yes! I think I just may have a fundoshi fetish. :D

mizbean May 23 2009, 17:50:43 UTC

You're welcome. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

And thank you for your prompt. I love this pairing, but I've been intimidated thus far from writing it. You gave me the push I needed!

naltariel May 23 2009, 16:46:19 UTC

lol. Love the contrast of what Byakuya expected himself to be and how he finally let it go. Go Renji!

mizbean May 23 2009, 18:14:49 UTC

Go Renji, indeed. Thanks for reading!

ravens_rising May 23 2009, 17:15:14 UTC

Oh gosh, this was great!! Perfect Byakuya and Renji. XD

mizbean May 23 2009, 18:15:28 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!